Recent Comments

8/9/21, 11:44 PM
Please continue this!
8/9/21, 9:41 PM
Great story! Length was just right, everything built to the climax -- which was a big one! Please give us more of this world.
8/9/21, 12:59 PM
This just keeps getting better! I love how you write Jared and Matt together, such a sexy and sweet sub/dom relationship. Would love to get a glimpse of their friendship as well (e.g. how they bonded initially) but mostly looking forward to watching Luke turn >:)
Ohiobuck47
8/9/21, 11:28 AM
I echo Grant Spiral's comments. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/9/21, 11:21 AM
This was excellent, particularly for a first story. Impressive. I enjoyed your characters and the mind-control aspect was well-handled with a good slow build-up.
8/9/21, 10:02 AM
Great first story! Can't wait to see where this is going :) welcome to the club ;)
8/9/21, 7:03 AM
Hottt. hope more is to come for Matt and Jared. Keep it up.
8/9/21, 6:50 AM
Congrats! You’ve written a splendid first story!!! If I had to nitpick then there’s like one or two grammatical things that could be better, but the flow and character development is great!!! Good job :)
8/8/21, 7:50 PM
Nice story. hope there is more to come.
8/6/21, 2:53 AM
Loving how this story developed so far, and can't wait for the next chapter.

8/6/21, 3:51 AM
Thanks! New chapter should be out soonish. @Dreamweavr