Recent Comments

8/10/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great series
8/10/21, 10:32 AM
Excellent beginning! You're a fantastic writer.
8/10/21, 7:04 AM
just great really, can't wait to read more
8/10/21, 6:17 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind comments! Definitely encouraged me to keep going. I'm writing part 2 right now and have some ideas as to where the story is headed. And don't worry, Ricardo and Eric will be included in parts to come!
Anonymous
8/10/21, 2:50 AM
Hope we see more of Ricardo and Eric in the follow up!
8/9/21, 11:44 PM
Please continue this!
8/9/21, 9:41 PM
Great story! Length was just right, everything built to the climax -- which was a big one! Please give us more of this world.
8/9/21, 12:59 PM
This just keeps getting better! I love how you write Jared and Matt together, such a sexy and sweet sub/dom relationship. Would love to get a glimpse of their friendship as well (e.g. how they bonded initially) but mostly looking forward to watching Luke turn >:)
Ohiobuck47
8/9/21, 11:28 AM
I echo Grant Spiral's comments. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8/9/21, 11:21 AM
This was excellent, particularly for a first story. Impressive. I enjoyed your characters and the mind-control aspect was well-handled with a good slow build-up.