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8/11/21, 3:31 AM
OK, first off: the sex scene was top quality. Top quality. That was some seriously good smut. As for the story that's developing and the characterization of Ronny, who is by turns a sexbeast but then regretful and vulnerable, and Fin who is putting up a good struggle against the transformations - well all I can say is that it leaves me wanting to know what will happen next. Not just wanting you to crank out some more smut, but I actually care about your characters now. So that's just awesome. Good job.
8/10/21, 10:56 PM
This story is great! I love the muscle growth transformation, and the sex scene is ACHINGLY hot, but it's the humanity in the characters--especially in their post-coital talk--that makes the tale truly special. There are so many stories of cocky "alphas" (a term I hate) having their way with guys and showing no emotion beyond dominance and cruelty. You clearly distinguish between the lusty Ronnie and Fin and their true selves. Fantastic work!
8/10/21, 9:55 PM
Really looking forward to part 2.
8/10/21, 9:43 PM
Great follow up, I really enjoyed the uncontrollable lust they both experiment while at it, followed by the more tender afterglow. Ronny is quite intriguing now!
8/10/21, 5:35 PM
Enjoyed this chapter, including its surprise ending!

8/10/21, 5:48 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The next chapter is almost finished, and I'm looking forward to sharing Julian with you all :3!
8/10/21, 10:53 AM
Such a great series
8/10/21, 10:32 AM
Excellent beginning! You're a fantastic writer.
8/10/21, 7:04 AM
just great really, can't wait to read more
8/10/21, 6:17 AM
Thank you everyone for the kind comments! Definitely encouraged me to keep going. I'm writing part 2 right now and have some ideas as to where the story is headed. And don't worry, Ricardo and Eric will be included in parts to come!
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8/10/21, 2:50 AM
Hope we see more of Ricardo and Eric in the follow up!