Recent Comments

8/16/21, 1:14 AM
I'm glad they bonded but I'm not happy about Fin being Ronny's "bitch". Semantics I suppose but also he was drugged by the pre-workout drink so he had no choice to really decide. Yes, he could have left when Ronny explained about how Betas have choice but by that point he was addicted.

8/16/21, 4:12 AM
@Cutlerfan I'm glad you feel this way! I wanted to leave the outcome up to the reader's interpretation. Some may think it was true love while others may think Ronny was more devious than he let on.
8/15/21, 11:13 PM
I specifically requested a happy ending. A happy ending was had. You cannot beat this level of customer service.

8/16/21, 12:38 AM
Lol what can I say? I'm a giver @amul

8/16/21, 1:15 AM
@Beaux_a I'm just kidding of course, the story was going to go where you the author needed it to go but I just sensed (and hoped) that your delightful characters would find happiness together.
hairyartist
8/15/21, 12:38 PM
so hot, thank you!

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@hairyartist I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Madoc Larkin
8/15/21, 5:35 PM
I really liked this series. Do you have any plans for continuing this setting with other characters?

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@Madoc Larkin Potentially! I haven't really decided what I want to do next, but I'm thinking of trying something else out, then returning back to this at some point.
8/15/21, 2:23 PM
What a wonderful ending. I like the mix of science and magic that explains the situation, and said explanation hits a sweet spot in terms of detail (not overly explained as to bog the story down, but also not so vague that it leaves a bunch of questions). It is hard to believe this is only your first story! You did a fantastic job. :)

8/15/21, 10:09 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words @Feed Your Head! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
8/15/21, 2:11 PM
Very excited to read more of how this turns out. Also curious to see what this "magic cock" we have been teased about does

8/15/21, 5:50 PM
Thanks! Marc's magic cock definitely makes an appearance next chapter. @ace_vage
8/13/21, 2:19 AM
Desperately waiting for the next chapter! Such a good read!

8/15/21, 5:49 PM
Thanks! Some real life stuff came up, but the next chapter is getting there! @italianstalian1987
Aug 12, 2021
Martin
8/15/21, 11:37 AM
What a wondeful story! It's a grace to this new site, thank you very much for posting it. The rimming scene is one of the most intense I've ever read! Once "GayCollarStories" will be up (should be a matter of two or three weeks from now), please make sure to crosspost this story there, too. It's rare that I have read such a sweet sub/dom story, and it will fit perfectly there as well.
Apr 4, 2017
8/14/21, 2:14 AM
This story is really something. At times I wasn't sure where it was going and I certainly was unprepared for where it ended up but the characters and storytelling were genuine - Both Roger and the narrator have faults but importantly they have redeeming qualities and that's what really hooks me as a reader.

8/15/21, 4:25 AM
@amul I really wanted this to be a story about a man who is sincerely trying to make the young man better, and to join with his lost love in the best possible way. Not a death of personality, but an enhancement though joining. It really should go over to the new Cupid site, I think. Most of my stuff probably belongs there.

Martin
8/15/21, 6:08 AM
@Papa Werebear You can simply use the edit function to publish any of your stories on Cupid. Just select it as an addition publishing site!
8/14/21, 2:34 AM
You're a gifted writer. The personality merging that you write about in your stories has a completely different tone from everyone else's mind control stories. I hope you write more stories that explore this theme.

8/15/21, 4:28 AM
@amul It's how I like to write merging. Mutualism rather than parasitism.