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8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.
8/16/21, 6:09 AM
Hot. Can;t wait for more.
8/16/21, 1:14 AM
I'm glad they bonded but I'm not happy about Fin being Ronny's "bitch". Semantics I suppose but also he was drugged by the pre-workout drink so he had no choice to really decide. Yes, he could have left when Ronny explained about how Betas have choice but by that point he was addicted.

8/16/21, 4:12 AM
@Cutlerfan I'm glad you feel this way! I wanted to leave the outcome up to the reader's interpretation. Some may think it was true love while others may think Ronny was more devious than he let on.
8/15/21, 11:13 PM
I specifically requested a happy ending. A happy ending was had. You cannot beat this level of customer service.

8/16/21, 12:38 AM
Lol what can I say? I'm a giver @amul

8/16/21, 1:15 AM
@Beaux_a I'm just kidding of course, the story was going to go where you the author needed it to go but I just sensed (and hoped) that your delightful characters would find happiness together.
hairyartist
8/15/21, 12:38 PM
so hot, thank you!

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@hairyartist I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
Madoc Larkin
8/15/21, 5:35 PM
I really liked this series. Do you have any plans for continuing this setting with other characters?

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@Madoc Larkin Potentially! I haven't really decided what I want to do next, but I'm thinking of trying something else out, then returning back to this at some point.
8/15/21, 2:23 PM
What a wonderful ending. I like the mix of science and magic that explains the situation, and said explanation hits a sweet spot in terms of detail (not overly explained as to bog the story down, but also not so vague that it leaves a bunch of questions). It is hard to believe this is only your first story! You did a fantastic job. :)

8/15/21, 10:09 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words @Feed Your Head! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
8/15/21, 2:11 PM
Very excited to read more of how this turns out. Also curious to see what this "magic cock" we have been teased about does

8/15/21, 5:50 PM
Thanks! Marc's magic cock definitely makes an appearance next chapter. @ace_vage
8/13/21, 2:19 AM
Desperately waiting for the next chapter! Such a good read!

8/15/21, 5:49 PM
Thanks! Some real life stuff came up, but the next chapter is getting there! @italianstalian1987
Aug 12, 2021
Martin
8/15/21, 11:37 AM
What a wondeful story! It's a grace to this new site, thank you very much for posting it. The rimming scene is one of the most intense I've ever read! Once "GayCollarStories" will be up (should be a matter of two or three weeks from now), please make sure to crosspost this story there, too. It's rare that I have read such a sweet sub/dom story, and it will fit perfectly there as well.