Recent Comments

8/16/21, 1:00 PM
Big fan of this series. I love the flow of events here; the little tease we get when we think Luke's going to give in and his scene with the coach both make the whole product sexier. I gotta say though, this chapter reads more like a rush job or an unfinished draft than previous ones did (which had clean, brief paragraphs, correct punctuation, clean spelling, in general showed a really high skill level!). Life gets crazy sometimes, it's all good, but going forward I'd personally be happy to wait two more weeks (or whatever) so you have time to finish editing and deliver that quality we know you're capable of!

8/16/21, 2:01 PM
@tenser13 It's good to know about it. I'm not sure how long it took me to write it, but I'll try to give a check before I post the next chapters. Thanks for the feedback!

8/16/21, 2:21 PM
@tenser13 I had messed up the paragraphs, I did a revision for that. Thanks for helping me notice!

8/17/21, 1:47 AM
@Lookintomyeyesboy Love it, thank you! And no problem, just happy to have your hot stories on here!
Martin
8/16/21, 8:38 PM
Honestly, the way you write, you don't need no kink. This scene was amazingly hot. I'm really honored to have you aboard! Please share more of these stories from a "less kinky phase"!

8/17/21, 12:25 AM
@Martin :3 you're too kind! I've got some stuff in mind for GCS but I just need to get through some life stuff first!
Martin
8/16/21, 8:24 PM
All right, now we have some drama... Let's see where this is heading. Please go on!

8/16/21, 10:50 PM
@Martin thanks for the comment. I was actually just going to do star on the next chapter. I'm glad you like it. I think the direction I take this in might branch off to a sequel story, if it turn out good, so, more is on the horizon.
Martin
8/16/21, 8:21 PM
It's a difficult topic, a love story with a self-loathing homophobic closet case... But I like what you did so far. Let's see where this is going! I hope it'll have a goog ending... :)
Anonymous
8/16/21, 6:43 AM
Very hot, the way you do dialogue is a bit confusing though

8/16/21, 2:22 PM
I ha messed up the spacing, it should be fixed now. Sorry about that.
8/16/21, 9:42 AM
What may also happened is that Ronny, realizing Fin was his Beta, did whatever he could to get Finn to accept it. If his inner drives were so pumped I can see his own self-justification. He may not have wanted to be without a Beta. I would hope that as they mature in their relationship that they will become more loving and less sex-focused. Ronny said that they're both just two guys. I hope he can realize that he didn't really give Fin a choice and apologize. I think Fin would forgive him soon enough.
8/16/21, 6:09 AM
Hot. Can;t wait for more.
8/16/21, 1:14 AM
I'm glad they bonded but I'm not happy about Fin being Ronny's "bitch". Semantics I suppose but also he was drugged by the pre-workout drink so he had no choice to really decide. Yes, he could have left when Ronny explained about how Betas have choice but by that point he was addicted.

8/16/21, 4:12 AM
@Cutlerfan I'm glad you feel this way! I wanted to leave the outcome up to the reader's interpretation. Some may think it was true love while others may think Ronny was more devious than he let on.
8/15/21, 11:13 PM
I specifically requested a happy ending. A happy ending was had. You cannot beat this level of customer service.

8/16/21, 12:38 AM
Lol what can I say? I'm a giver @amul

8/16/21, 1:15 AM
@Beaux_a I'm just kidding of course, the story was going to go where you the author needed it to go but I just sensed (and hoped) that your delightful characters would find happiness together.
hairyartist
8/15/21, 12:38 PM
so hot, thank you!

8/15/21, 10:11 PM
@hairyartist I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!