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8/24/21, 9:08 PM
This chapter was just as hot as the last chapter, but I do kind of agree with some of the earlier posters that said that Gabe's attitude seemed to have changed. It's clear that it must have seemed darker in an earlier version, and it's clear that it's better now. But I do hope we haven't lost the fun Gabe just because he's a dom top now. That being said, I'm digging the looser restrictions on heterosexuality that Sam is editing into this reality. It makes me think that maybe if actual reality were like that, maybe things would be better.
8/24/21, 6:14 PM
This is by far my favorite story of the year so far. I love the dialogue between Gabe and Sam. It feels really natural and fun and light-hearted. And I love the edits they’ve made, and seeing the impact on Sam. And it’s soooo damn hot. Thanks for writing Blue and Nutiper. The two of you make an incredible team, and having seen you write these chapters, I know how much work and thought goes into them. I really appreciate it.
Btm
8/23/21, 10:58 PM
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

8/24/21, 3:21 AM
It's super close! Just gotta do some minor editing... @Btm
8/23/21, 10:43 PM
This chapter feels really well edited, considering the comment that this one was cut short/rearranged. The subtle tone shift was well executed as a transition chapter from full hot scenes to more plot development. I fell myself getting pulled into the larger story. Great job!
8/23/21, 5:29 PM
Very hot! I look forward to the next chapter.
8/23/21, 12:22 PM
Loved it! The three guys waking up together was sweet and hot at the same time, and I liked the tension and release between Robert and Luke. Hope Matt can come give Robert some peace of mind soon 😏 formatting and proofreading stuff are spotless too! Thanks for posting.
8/23/21, 7:56 AM
I love this series :)
8/18/21, 8:03 PM
Chapter 13* specifically. Their original meeting is in chapter 5.

8/19/21, 8:37 AM
@Norismo Oh boy, yes, that's a bit complicated. Okay, so it's another version of the meeting, with the changes from the latter chapters? Okay, it makes a lot more sense that way. Still confused by the manor bit, but that might get explained later on.