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Anonymous
8/27/21, 7:53 PM
I absolutely love everything about this series, the build up is insane and every single scene is extremely hot. This has been my favorite series to read in years, keep up the amazing work!

8/27/21, 8:26 PM
Thanks! It definitely helps that I'm getting editing help and brainstorms from two people! @
8/27/21, 6:40 PM
Is it bad form to comment on a story you had some small part in? Hopefully it’s not. My contributions were a few small suggestions and occasional one or two line snippets plus numerous rereads. Which I’m happy to do. All that said… I can’t get enough of this story. I love Sam continuing to fix things in ways that make him gayer and gayer. I love how hot both Gabe and Marc are. I loved the build up in the art class modeling scene and then the hotness of the scene in the bathroom after. I loved the deepening of the mystery with the people in suits. I loved Sam being a dumbass. I loved the art class teacher. I loved the hints of teachers maybe knowing more about the people in suits maybe. I loved Marc throwing Teddy (or Freddy?) over his shoulder like a cave man. I loved Melanie continuing to not be interested in Sam. I loved Sam’s thinking about being gay or straight in regards to the Kinsey scale. I loved the Ethical Slut being tossed in there. Most of all, I love how much time and effort I know Blue and Nutiper put into this story. It’s extremely polished and extremely well-done and extremely hot, with more hotness to follow. Thanks to you both.

8/27/21, 7:30 PM
Thanks! And wow, I appreciate all the love even though you're probably sick of seeing a million drafts! @MonsterMash62
8/27/21, 6:47 PM
I so wanted to like this chapter but there are many things here that aren't to my liking. Which is absolutely sad as I loved the start of this story. I don't know, like I wouldn't comment but due to how things were it feels like the magic of it has changed.
8/27/21, 3:01 PM
if the edit that the boys make effect the world then it's likely that their dads, uncles and other males would do brojobs. also love your story.

8/27/21, 5:41 PM
Indeed it would! Thanks for the compliment! @Averageman
BearBoi
8/27/21, 5:44 AM
the slowly increasing masculinity-appreciation is damn nice
8/26/21, 6:20 PM
Great chapter man. I enjoyed the sex and the edits, but the part that really got me was the sexual tension with Marc at the meeting. I think we've all been in that position, where we're sitting just a little too close to someone we're attracted to.

8/27/21, 12:34 AM
Thanks! Marc kind of worked his magic on me -- he was just supposed to be a minor irritation to Sam when I first started writing this story. @Derek Williams
Revenge
8/26/21, 2:48 PM
cant believe it took me this much to start reading this and when i started i just couldnt stop... its so GOOD!!!! it goes straight into my favorite stories section

8/27/21, 12:33 AM
Thanks! @Revenge
8/26/21, 4:36 AM
I don't want this story to end :)

8/27/21, 12:32 AM
Aww, thanks! I have a bunch more chapters planned! @italianstalian1987
8/24/21, 8:11 PM
Finally getting back to this story and catching up on it now that a new chapter has been added and I love this chapter. Sam's experience getting a self-lubricating butt and really enjoying it is hitting many of my buttons, and I'm not surprised to see Nutiper was involved in this chapter based on that alone. I also like the relationship between Gabe and Sam, as well as their differences re: Gabe being generally thoughtful about the changes and Sam being VERY impulsive. I'm gonna keep reading and see what happens from here on.

Nutiper
8/25/21, 2:16 AM
@Proteus Ooooh I *do* have a yen for butts, though I will say that the entire self-lubricating butts concept and edit was 100% all Blue, haha. If you haven't already, you might enjoy checking out his earlier story, "Pan-Galactic Human Fan Club"! It's still in-progress and has a few chapters to go before it's completed, but it has a *lot* of really fun and hot stuff in it, including some hyper-sensitive butts... plus some other things too...

8/26/21, 1:47 AM
@Nutiper Thanks for the recommendation. I spent a good chunk of today reading it, and I'm thoroughly enjoying it. Super fun, and super hot aliens.

Nutiper
8/26/21, 4:11 AM
@Proteus Oh you are *very* welcome and I am glad you liked it! And I totally agree with your assessment — *fun* and *hot* are great words for it, ha. I am excited for the eventual final chapters!
8/25/21, 7:51 PM
AMAZING new chapter! I love the fixes to Sam's selfish brojob edit and the slow spiral he's on toward just straight up wanting to be gay. The dance around putting him and Marc together is masterful, and I can't wait to see all the changes on the way there. Personally, I'm enjoying the way their constant horniness is getting the better of them and leading them to make poorly thought out edits. I wouldn't mind a mix of occasional smarter edits thrown in, but I'm absolutely on board for horny college bros letting their dicks and butts do the thinking for them ;)

8/26/21, 2:29 AM
Thanks! I originally had more Marc in this chapter, but it got too long so I split it into two chapters. I have a mix of dumb horny edits and at least *moderately* clever changes planned for future chapters. @Curiosity