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SC Walker
8/28/21, 7:03 AM
As always, an excellent chapter. Your sex scene descriptions are so illustrative and hot, I love how you can use words to really paint a picture of what is happening. I wish you could teach me how to write like that lol I'm really intrigued by the "black suits" subplot. My guess is that it's related to another one of your stories ;) The mystery is very intriguing and I have tons of theories about the female teachers... Maybe it's the big softie in me, but I love how caring and attentive Marc is. I actually kind of ship him and Sam. Not sure if that is your intention. I agree with the other reader that more than anyone I want Marc to have a happy ending. Sam and Gabe both can act like jerks, but Marc has consistently been portrayed as a very sweet, but extremely horny and gifted, stud. I will say, though, that tension and anticipation and build up are good, but sometimes too much build up can lead to disappointment if the end result isn't worth it. by that I mean, I hope by the end of the story what all your readers are likely hoping for will happen to Sam. I can be patient (and intrigued), but it also makes me nervous that I'm going to end up disappointed.

Nutiper
8/28/21, 7:37 AM
@SC Walker Oh! What are you hoping will happen to Sam? Like, a happy ending? Or are you thinking something more specific (like anal)?

SC Walker
8/28/21, 12:52 PM
Yeah, I'm hoping eventually Sam will get fucked. I think the story is getting there, but I'm not 100% sure. Maybe it's just me being inpatient but I could never write a story with this much teasing haha. @Nutiper

SC Walker
8/28/21, 12:56 PM
To be more specific, the goal of this chapter seemed to be humiliating and embarassing Sam, which isn't that appealing to me. I just feel bad for him. I enjoy it more when Sam is enthusiastic and enjoying it, not when he's cumming against his will, humiliating himself in front of people. @SC Walker

8/28/21, 2:13 PM
Thanks for the compliment! Revise, revise, revise is my best advice! The first draft was done a while ago, but I've been tweaking it with Nu and MM's help for weeks. Coming back to something you wrote the next day (or a couple days later) is helpful, I think! I won't spoil anything with teachers and blacksuits, but there's definitely a lot more plot mixed in with the porn in future chapters. Hopefully Gabe and Sam aren't coming across as *too* jerky. I'm trying to write them as (other than pushing each other's buttons) horny college guys who are really making an effort to be "ethical sluts" -- eager to try new things with new people without hurting anyone's feelings -- and it comes a little more naturally to Sam who's a bit of a people pleaser, even if he always has sex on the brain. @SC Walker

8/28/21, 2:17 PM
Some of that I included because I like a little light humiliation, but *also* every time Sam gets embarrassed (or potentially embarrassed) it pushes the plot/changes forward because one of his defining characteristics is his need to maintain his "straight" reputation -- even if it gets a little ridiculous! @SC Walker

SC Walker
8/28/21, 2:35 PM
I totally understand that, sorry if I came across trying to dictate your story to you. I think you've put in alot of effort into making Sam likeable sure he's a dumbass , but as you said he is just trying to enjoy himself. Creating such syampathetic character is a win in itself @bluesuedewho

8/28/21, 6:49 PM
Oh no, you're good! I was just worried things were still coming across as darker than I intended. @SC Walker
8/27/21, 8:44 PM
the way how this story has a strangle hold on my cock and orgasms... I love it so much!

8/28/21, 2:03 PM
Thanks! What a compliment! @Thexshxboi
Aug 27, 2021
8/28/21, 4:05 AM
Hot, sexy story with a lot of group sex...my kind of story! Excellent writing...you felt like you were there in the shed with all the guys (wish I was). The hairy boss sounded super sexy, the character descriptions were great and the sex scenes had me hard an leaking the hole time. Keep up the great and write more!

8/28/21, 8:24 AM
@MuscleSon69 Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!
8/28/21, 4:23 AM
so fucking hot! cant wait to see what else he puts into the agenda!
8/28/21, 2:02 AM
I do hope Sam can accept that he likes doing "gay stuff" eventually.
8/28/21, 1:04 AM
I love the story, and I especially love the interactions between Gabe and Sam. I can definitely see that Sam and Marc are being pulled together with the edits made, but I hope that even if Sam eventually succumbs to Marc magic dick he doesn't lose his relationship with Gabe. No matter what happens, this is a fantastic story, and I'm super excited to see what changes and events you write in future chapters, keep up the awesome work!

8/28/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! I try to avoid spoilers (although I'm probably bad at it...) but I will say that Sam and Gabe are still close friends at the end of the story! @Jacker
8/28/21, 12:12 AM
I wasn’t expecting another chapter so soon — great surprise! The tension between Marc and Sam is my favourite part of this whole deal, though Gabriel and Sam is a really fun dynamic too. I’m a little worried for Sam. At the rate this is going, I suspect bottoming might become a straight dude thing. And there aren’t that many straight guys left on campus! I’m seriously curious what’s up with the black suits. I sure hope nobody pranks them by replacing their bottled water with tap water.

8/28/21, 1:45 AM
It was originally one massive chapter, but I thought splitting it up and polishing both bits would be a smoother read! The black suits plot thread definitely starts moving faster in the next chapter. @Derek Williams
8/27/21, 10:46 PM
This series is just an absolute gift. So hot and funny and heartwarming. Thanks again for posting.

8/27/21, 11:04 PM
Thanks! And you're welcome! @tenser13
8/27/21, 7:56 PM
The entire art class scene was super hot, especially how Sam's ass kept making it harder and harder for Marc to hold on, inadvertently leading to near sex between them right in class. I'll admit to hoping hoping they would fuck, but I'm guessing you're saving that for a future chapter. The descriptions of the sex in the bathroom, as well as Sam's reactions to it was super hot. I also loved how Marc was still there to make sure that Sam was okay. I like Marc a lot and want to see him have a happy ending. I grow more intrigued by the black suited people and that some of the teachers might know about the book. Or they at least know of magic being a thing. I do think the teacher angle is a little out of left field, but maybe there were hints I missed because of the heat in previous chapters. Guess I might have to go reread them. I'll also echo MonsterMash in that I enjoy that Sam's idea to keep himself straight continues to make himself gayer, while still thinking everything he does is only for straights. I'm also impressed by the last edit Sam made. It was remarkably smart and not made out of lust. I'm looking forward to finding out how this story is going to unfold. And what other sexy shenanigans Sam is going to find himself in.

8/27/21, 8:31 PM
Thanks for the detailed comments! They make writing silly smut worth it! @Proteus
Anonymous
8/27/21, 7:53 PM
I absolutely love everything about this series, the build up is insane and every single scene is extremely hot. This has been my favorite series to read in years, keep up the amazing work!

8/27/21, 8:26 PM
Thanks! It definitely helps that I'm getting editing help and brainstorms from two people! @