Recent Comments

9/4/21, 9:34 AM
Great start! Excited to see where this story goes next.
9/2/21, 2:21 AM
Loving this story and the interplay between these well-developed characters. Looking forward to what happens next.

9/2/21, 7:31 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! We love hearing your thoughts! At this point, the story has caught up to where we had written, so I'm excited to discover what will happen alongside you!
9/2/21, 3:07 PM
Please don't let this story die, the entire set up is one of my favorites I've seen on this
9/1/21, 2:06 AM
Ahhh, great! I wasn't expecting another instalment of the Weregorilla saga. It was hot and romantic, a very sweet way to end it.
8/31/21, 7:23 PM
hottt. hope more is to come.

8/31/21, 9:43 PM
@Jonanator thank you so much! definitely more coming!

8/31/21, 9:47 PM
@time.to.occur Great, it's my favorite story. I do have on question, and you can choose to answer it or not, does Rhys actually love Jasper?

8/31/21, 11:52 PM
@Jonanator aww, thank you! And I think I'd answer that question this way: Rhys does have very strong feelings for Jasper but I don't think even he knows yet whether he loves him! Here's what Cuddle-switch says: "Rhys isn't stopping to think about what his feelings are. If you were to ask him, he would say that of course he isn't in love. If he were to stop and think about it, he would wonder because he does have strong feelings. In my mind, I haven't firmly decided if he's in love or just interested and infatuated. Who knows where those feelings will take him?"

8/31/21, 11:57 PM
@time.to.occur Well, then I'll have to wait for more to see if it leads to a romantic love or not. I'm loving this. you two have done a really great Story. Can't wait. I'm a die hard fan now.

9/1/21, 12:05 AM
@Jonanator We're both so glad to hear to hear that and look forward to writing and posting more!

9/1/21, 12:08 AM
@time.to.occur Great. can't wait. Enjoy your night.
leonardoPT
8/30/21, 9:30 PM
I love the story since I made it up to this chapter. But if I understand correctly, I must go to another site (paid?) to read the further chapters. That seems mindfucking in (commercial) practice. At least say that at the start of a series.

8/30/21, 11:04 PM
@leonardoPT Hi. Thanks for your comments and thanks for the feedback. Further chapters will be posted here in the future (Next chapter will probably be posted between this weekend and next weekend), but yes, the paid site will stay ahead of the story. To be perfectly honest, I lost my job a year ago and paying readers have been one of my sources of income to keep on going.

leonardoPT
8/30/21, 11:29 PM
@Lookintomyeyesboy I sympathize with your position, and writing stories for fellow kinksters is a real honorable way to help in making a living. And it adds beauty to the world. But i feel mislead when you write halfway the series: "If you want to know what comes next, you can find the rest of the story in my Patreon " What read like that you cannot know what comes next unless you go to Patreon. It might be seen as walking over the edge, but for me it is not respectful to the readers and GSS. My suggestion would be to say straightforward (at the start of the series) that it will be published in GSS, but those who support you in Patreon, have a head start and perhaps other privileges. Success wih your writings.

Martin
8/31/21, 3:39 PM
I agree with Lenonardo, that it would be better to mention that the chapters will be released here some time later as well.

8/31/21, 6:39 PM
@Martin Got it. Let me think of the wording and I'll put it in all the chapters here.
Aug 27, 2021
Jack
8/30/21, 4:30 PM
Varlance, this was a great story, man! It was hot, it was romantic, and I definitely would love to see more chapters to see where it goes. Thanks for adding the visuals, as well. I know that it's more work for you, but I really appreciated it. You've got a great handle on creating a scene and dialogue, both of which are sorely lacking in a lot of romance/porn stories. I hope to see more of your work in the *near* future. This site could use more excellent authors like yourself!

8/30/21, 6:08 PM
@Jack Thanks Jack! Actually most of the pictures came from the good people on Discord. Glad you liked it!
8/29/21, 9:41 PM
lol I feel like I'm ms Ruth reading this story 😂 really hope Sam ends up with Marc tho, he seems like such a sweet guy 😊 also, I was so sure that keeping that position was going to end with Sam accidentally impaled on Marc lol 😏 guess there's always next time

8/29/21, 11:05 PM
Oooh! Haha, now I wish I had done that instead... I probably shouldn't go back and edit it... @Botbot
8/27/21, 7:00 PM
Also, since when couldn't partial edits be made? I'm pretty sure that was allowed. So he should totally be ae to cross out "magic dick" but keep the rest. One of the frustrating elemebts of us following the "straight" guy is we never get to enjoy the sex scenes as the top or to completion. I wish marc's cock slipped into his while they were posing.

8/28/21, 11:43 PM
@Heru Kane It's not so much they can't make partial edits, as they're both too panicky and too sex-addled to think through all the myriad variations, so they don't even try.

8/29/21, 12:03 AM
Exactly! Gabe and Sam are horny dumbasses who aren't thinking 100% logically about how the book works. @HyperMuscleDirk

8/29/21, 12:12 AM
@bluesuedewho I miss the logic of the starting chapters. They were quite enjoyable. Now its thoughtless decisions rather than the ones where they were smart enough to protect the book and to make sure they couldn't write themselves out of reality and such.

8/29/21, 12:48 AM
I'm not sure either Gabe or Sam are especially logical thinkers! Gabe might have been a bit more relatively thoughtful about edits (and Sam has the occasional lucid moment), but both of them are mostly just thinking about getting off at the end of the day. Not that there aren't smart edits planned for future chapters -- just expect most of the drama to come from wacky changes! @Heru Kane

Anonymous
8/29/21, 2:05 AM
@bluesuedewho @Heru Kane I mean, I personally kind of *like* the fact that they aren't making perfectly logical decisions. It lets things spiral out of control and create... you know, conflict, drama, intrigue. One of the fun things about this story for *me* specifically is that things don't go as planned, and we get to watch two well meaning sex motivated idiots warp reality and scramble to deal with the consequences. I'm not sure if the early chapters were really "more logical" so much as just... things hadn't escalated as much yet, there wasn't horny juice in the water supply, and the two of them were a bit more cautious about using the book. Idk! I've loved this story a LOT so far and I trust bluesuedewho to create an interesting plot without needing it to come from Sam and Gabe's direct intentions. Nothing has felt out of character really for me so much as just a natural progression from where we started given the changes so far.

8/29/21, 9:42 PM
@Anonymous agreed! this has been fun while not throwing away previous plot points like Marc being into Sam or the people in
BearBoi
8/29/21, 12:46 AM
i don't know about anyone else, but I imagine Bussy with the voice of Jiz https://youtu.be/xAK108u2xAs