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Anonymous
9/13/21, 10:04 PM
cant wait for another chapter
9/13/21, 9:45 PM
This is one of my favorite stories in a long time. I check the site daily for updates. I kinda hope this is a LONG story. There is so much you can do with this. Keep up the amazing work!
nycboot
9/13/21, 1:32 PM
Whoa! I give you an "A" for originality!!! Looking forward to see where you're gonna take this one.

9/13/21, 3:14 PM
Aw... thank you @nycboot! It's just a bit of a fun thing for me to write, but already the ideas are bubbling away!
9/13/21, 12:21 AM
Wow. Love this series so much - especially the slightly indirect nature of the latest edits. Like, Gabe's precum making recipients just kind of *anticipate* what's next is such a clever little twist on what could be a run-of-the-mill "my precum makes you horny" idea. Which, lol, is actually quite a bizarre idea, unless you're operating on the relative scale that is GSS, so... Anyway. Point is, I liked it. Insanely hot chapter. Keep it coming!
9/12/21, 7:38 PM
excited to see where this goes

9/12/21, 8:47 PM
To be honest, @Human Dragon Fruit... so am I! :D
9/12/21, 7:19 AM
What a twist! Looking forward to more.

9/12/21, 8:46 PM
@Norismo I'll keep trying to provide more twists and turns!
Buckyboi
9/11/21, 9:48 PM
OK, **definitely** following this one!

9/12/21, 8:46 PM
@Buckyboi Well, thank you very much! I hope you enjoy it!
Martin
9/10/21, 8:33 PM
That story is amazing, really. I'm not into fisting, but reading this made me want to be Derek in that moment. There's so much potential for crazy hot perverse sex stories in this scenario, so we can only hope that you'll keep coming up with more adventures between Razz and Derek. Especially since you teased me already with your mentioning of rubber ... :)
9/10/21, 8:49 AM
ohhhh, teasing about somebody else who will probably show up! And we have a mysterious main bad guy for the story! I'm hyped!!! Wonder how Zane will react to what he'll learn. Okay, so the dad probably doesn't know what happened, that explain a lot. Hehehhehe, Dylan has his father's possessiveness.

Jonanator
9/10/21, 4:42 PM
@BobbyBlobfish I'm glad you like it. I'll post the new chapter later.
9/10/21, 2:04 PM
*Honey,* that fisting scene was hot as all hell. I don’t know how unrealistic it is, if at all, to be able to pull out your whole fist and push it right the fuck back in, but *damn,* it turned me on anyway. Also, guilty pleasure, the word “punching” calls back all my S/M tendencies even though there wasn’t a hint of pain. Switching from sexy to romantic to sexy, with dirty talk in the midst of the romance, was a great idea. Even though Razz came down in the middle, I didn’t. You focused the romantic conversation effectively and it bled right into the next scene. Once again, great story, great fun, great writing! You’re a worthy competitor. (Also, once the contest is over would you consider adding another with Razz bottoming or Derek deepthroating? I saw there were the other two Derek/Razz stories but size stealing isn’t always my thing. I might try them still, especially if they’re temporary changes.)

9/10/21, 4:28 PM
@Soren Fitz My goal with Razz and Derek is definitely "semi-unrealistic but hot as hell" hahaha. Thank you for your incredibly nice comments and detailed feedback. You managed to compliment the things I was most unsure/anxious about from a writing perspective across both parts. Also, in terms of how I write these characters, almost everything they do with major physical changes is temporary, especially the dramatic size stuff. I'm not big into "stuck with X" type things, especially for recurring characters. In my mind it's kinda like sitcom rules -- even if a story ends with them TF'd in some way, the expectation is that they'd revert "off camera". I probably will continue writing them. I have a TF-heavy story that's been in drafts for, uhhh, probably two years at this point, but I'd also like to pick up more of these early-relationship threads I hinted at in this story like what you mentioned. My writing inspiration is an unfortunately fickle beast -- I also have two non-R&D unfinished series on GSS with drafts stuck in writer's block -- so I'll try to tame it as best I can.