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10/4/21, 11:23 PM
I was slightly disturbed but I felt there was plenty of set-up at the beginning to establish that Razz and Derek were in love and that Derek was pretty cognizant about how his partner's magic works. He wasn't worried, so I wasn't very worried. I did feel a bit of anxiety at the false perception of time - two months, and thought that maybe the "solution" to the problem with the shit job was that Razz kept him like that for long enough that he'd be fired from the job, but I was not at all surprised when that was revealed to simply be false, part of the fantasy. Great story and expertly written.

10/4/21, 11:30 PM
@amul thanks for the feedback! glad it worked for you. and yes, Derek being so willing was the main way I hoped to convey that everything was safe despite seeming dangerous/scary. that's why I was kinda worried to lose his perspective for the middle because the 3rd person neutral narration is much harsher sounding. thanks again for the comment, i really appreciate it!
Anonymous
10/4/21, 6:07 PM
next one please!!!
9/4/21, 9:26 PM
I seriously appreciate your warning to wait. Haha Will there he sex later on? Also you’re one of my favorite writers. If you ever wanna chat I’m on discord or something. Just saying.

10/4/21, 4:29 PM
@RedShifter Hey, man! I'm abysmal at responding to comments, so sorry for the delayed response. Super glad you read. :) I'm on discord too and always welcome a hello!
10/3/21, 1:39 PM
This was nice and hot, and it didn’t need a montage to do it! I appreciated the focus on the single foursome, with the occasional mention of other things happening that added to the general hotness. This was a great story.
Jack
10/2/21, 2:37 PM
I'm really intrigued by this story. There's so many things that *could* happen. After all, he was just imagining Marcello's reaction. I don't know if just one response is enough for you, but I'd love to see more of this!
nycboot
9/17/21, 10:26 PM
Well, if you accept hints from readers....where was one really nice dog transformation story, [Fulfilling Their Destiny](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/105313), where the author knew that dogs have hypersensitive scent glands (humans have about 6 million receptors; dogs have about 100 million) and made it part of the story. Still loving it so far - although maybe it it's more appropriate to Gay Cupid. But enjoying it anyway.

9/18/21, 11:25 AM
Oh I remember reading this years ago! @nycboot I mean, I'll try to throw in more about Charlie's dual realities if it feels organic to the story, but the level of detail in the transformations PupScout put in was amazing! I'll admit, it's a way more soft and gentle story than anything I've ever written before... and in some ways, it's not at all the sort of thing I'd ever seek out, but I'm enjoying the challenge and seeing where I can take an story that started out as a dream as I woke up one morning!

10/2/21, 1:29 AM
Fullfilling Their Destiny...that was my first story. Thanks for the shout out. @nycboot
10/1/21, 7:47 PM
great start, can't wait to see the "gift" Jimmy gets and what he does with it
9/30/21, 9:06 PM
Very good. I like the potential here. Dom/sub ethics in BDSM is such a ripe topic.