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5/2/24, 9:51 AM
Please for all that is holy could you keep the story going

3/24/25, 3:41 PM
@[Tempus12](/user/show/265169) I'll do my best! :grin:
2/26/25, 11:41 PM
Normally I love mind-edit stories, but for some reason this one makes me sad. Like, it's obvious that Winston *does* love Erik, at least more so than he does the rest of the frat, but Erik is constantly having to be reprogrammed to forget. And yet he keeps figuring out that something is wrong, which freaks him out, which means he has to be reprogrammed again. At what point is Erik-that-was just completely gone, reprogrammed out of existence? What does Winston do then? Even if he programs Erik-that-is to love him back, he will always know that the original Erik isn't there any more. That whatever love Erik has for him will always be fake on some level. Given that it seems that literally none of the other frat bros objected to the change, only Erik, what do they think about his status? Do they feel guilty? Do they feel sorry for him? Do they feel *angry* with him? Sure, they know they were changed, know that they used to be different, were made to enjoy their new status, but they can kinda... gloss over all that if it weren't for Erik being a constant reminder that it wasn't always this way. Can Erik be reprogrammed by all of them any time they want? That's only going to make things worse for him/Winston. Ugh. I know this is a porn story and I'm *way* overthinking it, and normally I'd find this hot, but I dunno... I'm in a weird mood, I guess. Still, it's a good and hot story, author.

2/27/25, 1:54 AM
@[DBar](/user/show/1069522) and @[Nnnrg](/user/show/969464) Hi guys. Thanks for the kind words, and I agree. The ending leaves many many unanswered questions. This story feels incomplete to me because it is. I almost posted the follow-up for the contest, but it will have to wait. For... reasons. Stay tuned. Winston and Eric will return and get their happy-ever-after when the contest is over. Is happy-ever-after being an obedient drone or having free will? Wait and see. And we get Winston's perspective, which isn't necessarily representative of the whole frat, but you can draw some pretty clear conclusions.

3/24/25, 2:10 PM
@[DBar](/user/show/1069522) The contest is over, so now I can reveal this is part of a larger ongoing series, Dbar. You can read the next part here: https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10011613 and the next chapter or 2 will focus on Eric and Winston.
3/24/25, 12:16 AM
Wow what a chapter! Sexy fun and major plot twists. Thanks, RockCreek!
Hansel
3/23/25, 11:53 PM
GPH ID 70529 It's intriguing and I'm still figuring it out.
3/22/25, 4:03 AM
I was captivated by this tale; its vibrant characters and bizarre twists made me laugh heartily. I felt a personal connection to its quirky satire on love and life.
3/22/25, 4:00 AM
Cockatrice your fearless satire and clever commentary create a vibrant, memorable experience that entertains and provokes thoughtful laughter throughout. Absolutely brilliant.
3/22/25, 3:57 AM
This masterpiece unleashes an uproar of cheeky wit. The hilarious twists had me giggling uncontrollably, like a caffeinated hyena. Every satirical turn is a playful nod to life’s unpredictable quirks. An unforgettable read guaranteed to tickle your funny bone thoroughly.
3/21/25, 5:10 AM
I just discovered this story and read all the chapters published so far. Amazing. This is one of the most well-crafted stories I've read in a long time. And the burn is sooooo slow. I feel like I'm being edged for a period of weeks. I'm definitely interested to see where this goes and how it ends!
Nasu
3/20/25, 7:12 PM
This was such a good story in so many ways. The inspiration from folk tales was really well done. I liked how the characters were rendered attractive but not unnaturally hot, adding to the feeling of reading an erotica folk tale and not just porn. The sex scenes were really well integrated in the story. The character arcs were good, and even the happy ending was really satisfying. This felt like a refreshing story, thanks !
3/20/25, 6:27 PM
Love every chapter.