Recent Comments

9/18/21, 4:03 AM
Ok, now, I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter.
9/6/21, 3:13 PM
This was a nice story. I liked it.

9/18/21, 1:22 AM
@Jonanator Thanks! Honestly, that’s a great compliment, just to know it was pleasant to read. I’m happy you liked it.

Jonanator
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Soren Fitz yeah, it was really great. hope more stories like this are in the works.
9/6/21, 4:20 PM
This is so beautiful.

9/18/21, 1:24 AM
@Honeyflower 😳 I appreciate that so much. When I finished writing it I was at the tail end of the crazy intense sex scene, so “beautiful” wasn’t on my mind. But it’s really validating to know that that’s how you and others describe it. Thanks.
Martin
9/6/21, 8:40 AM
Oh man... what an incredible sex scene you've written. A little bit over the top at the end, but amazing regardless.... And at the same time so romantic! Guys, If you read this on GSS, make sure to head over to GayCupid [using this link](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/story/show/10002388) to give this story the proper "romance" rating, too. It deserves it! And I have to change the coding to make it possible to rate all categories from all sites on cross posted stories. But for now you've got to do that manually please!

9/18/21, 1:21 AM
@Martin Hah, well, I got really into the scene while I was writing it, and I can go overboard. (It’s safe to say that if I wrote another scene as an epilogue it’d be even more intense, so… maybe I have a problem!) I’m glad you enjoyed.
9/17/21, 11:59 PM
Finally, a "bully" story that I can get behind. This was very well-written start to finish. It truly felt like a romance story (with erotic scenes) and is an excellent entry into the contest.
9/17/21, 9:17 PM
I’m loving this—the subtle bittersweetness of Charlie transforming back and forth, the little bits of foreshadowing you scatter around, the sex—actually, I wanted to mention, I love how much precum he was leaking; please don’t drop that in future chapters, because it was hot as fuck.

9/17/21, 9:58 PM
Well, thank you very much, @Soren Fitz! I agree, I think it is quite a bittersweet relationship the two of them have... how can you have a relationship with someone who can't control if or when they'll actually be there? More precum coming your way!
nycboot
9/17/21, 7:06 PM
I guess it's the fate of readers that you want to shout at the protagonist "Just ask him what's going on!" but of course that's too easy. I like that you incorporated the idea that dogs are mostly colorblind.

9/17/21, 9:56 PM
I mean... he did @nycboot! You can't expect a straight answer from a gay dog! I've tried to throw in a few little bits here and there where I can, just to keep it interesting!
Anonymous
9/17/21, 5:17 PM
Well, Im glad they had the time to finish the blowjob at least. It couldve gotten... hairy

9/17/21, 5:57 PM
Ay, chihuahua! That would've been unpleasant.
Sep 15, 2021
Martin
9/16/21, 8:19 PM
Very cute, really well written and it got me hard! So mission accomplished!