Recent Comments

9/18/21, 5:40 PM
Well, I wish you luck and good writing but this story has gone so far from its original premise that its not fun anymore for me. The change to the two twinks and the super increase in some random foe and the utterly thoughtless edits has made the main character unlikable to me. So yeah, thumbs up, good luck, but this story is not what it was. Which is super sad as I loved the story at the start and eagerly awaited new additions.
9/6/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderfully creative. So sweet and insightful on so many levels. Awesome story telling. So powerful that I felt lonely myself, pining for what they were able to have. If you can invoke that kind of emotion, you're a powerful storyteller!

9/18/21, 4:36 PM
@Stroppy Author If there's anything I love to do, whether fiction or non-fiction, it's to tell stories. I've often felt like I can't do that when also writing smut, but writing this and hearing that it had such an impact on you actually really energises me to keep doing the same (even with the incredibly smutty stories I'm planning to put out next...). I'm sorry you felt lonely, but I'm also warmed that it had that impact. Thanks for the high praise.
Jack
9/18/21, 9:29 AM
Oh, my heart broke at the end. You already know this is a good story, Author, but let me just tell you that I am feeling things I wasn't expecting to feel.

9/18/21, 11:30 AM
@Jack, I'm genuinely surprised by the comments and reactions this story has had so far... I really just did not expect it. So I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it, and I sincerely hope you love where it goes.
9/18/21, 7:32 AM
I'm literally aching for the next chapter :) (jokingly, not trying to rush you)
9/18/21, 4:50 AM
Fuck yea, Captain America is in trouble
9/18/21, 4:03 AM
Ok, now, I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter.
9/6/21, 3:13 PM
This was a nice story. I liked it.

9/18/21, 1:22 AM
@Jonanator Thanks! Honestly, that’s a great compliment, just to know it was pleasant to read. I’m happy you liked it.

Jonanator
9/18/21, 2:06 AM
@Soren Fitz yeah, it was really great. hope more stories like this are in the works.
9/6/21, 4:20 PM
This is so beautiful.

9/18/21, 1:24 AM
@Honeyflower 😳 I appreciate that so much. When I finished writing it I was at the tail end of the crazy intense sex scene, so “beautiful” wasn’t on my mind. But it’s really validating to know that that’s how you and others describe it. Thanks.
Martin
9/6/21, 8:40 AM
Oh man... what an incredible sex scene you've written. A little bit over the top at the end, but amazing regardless.... And at the same time so romantic! Guys, If you read this on GSS, make sure to head over to GayCupid [using this link](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/story/show/10002388) to give this story the proper "romance" rating, too. It deserves it! And I have to change the coding to make it possible to rate all categories from all sites on cross posted stories. But for now you've got to do that manually please!

9/18/21, 1:21 AM
@Martin Hah, well, I got really into the scene while I was writing it, and I can go overboard. (It’s safe to say that if I wrote another scene as an epilogue it’d be even more intense, so… maybe I have a problem!) I’m glad you enjoyed.