Recent Comments

9/18/21, 4:49 AM
My god, awesome chapter. if I wasn't hooked enough before, then I am now. I can't wait for more. I think you have yourself a new fan.

9/18/21, 11:28 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much... but if you like this sort of story, I implore you, don't check out my other stories; demons, evil power hungry tyrants, muscle growth and cruel sex... this is the sugar, that's the spice!

9/18/21, 11:59 AM
@HunkLover I have in the past, your truly

9/18/21, 8:29 PM
Truly what? TRULY WHAT!?!!?! I can't stand the anticipation @Jonanator!!

9/18/21, 8:32 PM
@HunkLover truly a great author. I think with this story, you just got yourself a new fan. I am a huge fan of gay love stories. I might ask my Daddy if I can write down ours one day.

9/18/21, 8:40 PM
Aw... that's so lovely of you @Jonanator! Thank you. I hope to one day read your story!

9/18/21, 8:43 PM
@HunkLover thanks🙂 can't wait for more.... and hopefully, you will
9/18/21, 7:51 PM
I'm really enjoying this very creative and sweet story, with the added element of mystery as to what is triggering the transformation. I look forward to what happens next.

9/18/21, 8:30 PM
Aw thanks @Hypnoguy67! It's lovely of you to comment. I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters!
Buckyboi
9/18/21, 3:09 AM
Oh, so Charlie's there to help our protagonist be happy, since it seems like he changes when he's extremely unhappy. I know, I know, no questions will be spoiled in the comments. XD I had a thought last chapter of our hero taking Charlie for a walk while in dog form and suddenly poof! Naked twink on a leash in public. XD Interesting that that sort of happened, although not the way it had played out in my head. XD Charlie is such a good boy!

9/18/21, 11:27 AM
Close, but no cigar @Buckyboi! But I love that you're thinking about it. I had toyed with that idea, if I'm honest, but I think I might have something that feels like a nice way to explain everything... we'll see!

Buckyboi
9/18/21, 6:18 PM
@HunkLover Ah, well, at least I'm getting closer. XD
9/18/21, 5:40 PM
Well, I wish you luck and good writing but this story has gone so far from its original premise that its not fun anymore for me. The change to the two twinks and the super increase in some random foe and the utterly thoughtless edits has made the main character unlikable to me. So yeah, thumbs up, good luck, but this story is not what it was. Which is super sad as I loved the story at the start and eagerly awaited new additions.
9/6/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderfully creative. So sweet and insightful on so many levels. Awesome story telling. So powerful that I felt lonely myself, pining for what they were able to have. If you can invoke that kind of emotion, you're a powerful storyteller!

9/18/21, 4:36 PM
@Stroppy Author If there's anything I love to do, whether fiction or non-fiction, it's to tell stories. I've often felt like I can't do that when also writing smut, but writing this and hearing that it had such an impact on you actually really energises me to keep doing the same (even with the incredibly smutty stories I'm planning to put out next...). I'm sorry you felt lonely, but I'm also warmed that it had that impact. Thanks for the high praise.
Jack
9/18/21, 9:29 AM
Oh, my heart broke at the end. You already know this is a good story, Author, but let me just tell you that I am feeling things I wasn't expecting to feel.

9/18/21, 11:30 AM
@Jack, I'm genuinely surprised by the comments and reactions this story has had so far... I really just did not expect it. So I'm very happy to know you're enjoying it, and I sincerely hope you love where it goes.
9/18/21, 7:32 AM
I'm literally aching for the next chapter :) (jokingly, not trying to rush you)
9/18/21, 4:50 AM
Fuck yea, Captain America is in trouble
9/18/21, 4:03 AM
Ok, now, I'm hooked! I can't wait for the next chapter.