Recent Comments

SC Walker
9/19/21, 12:50 AM
This has been one of my favorite stories ever, but I'm beginning to feel like it's going off the rails a little bit. The edits are becoming more and more outlandish. It feels less like edits that the characters would actuslly make and more like edits thst the author wanted to make happen. The characters started out reckless and impulsive, but now they just seem like imbeciles. The whole thing is becoming sillier and sillier, I enjoy a light tongue-in-cheek tone, but something sbout Marc having a weather controlling magic dick seems likea separate idea that belonged in its own story but instead is being forced into this one. Maybe it's because this chapter is thefirst half, but it feels pretty incomplete on its own. I have a feeling next chapter will be really good since this chapter is all setup.

9/19/21, 1:35 AM
Things are going off the rails by design! Reality edits are piling up, and unexpected ripples with them. There are tons of notes and plot outlines behind the scenes here. Marc having some outlandish superhero powers was set up last chapter, for example -- and Sam's edit was rooted in his love of comic books. @SC Walker
9/18/21, 11:35 PM
Wow, a truly zany chapter. I just keep getting thirstier and thirstier for when Marc finally gets Sam. Thanks for posting!

9/19/21, 1:30 AM
Thanks! Glad you're appreciating the zaniness! @tenser13
9/18/21, 10:25 PM
I'm really liking the story. I was skeptical at the first chapter since it at first seemed like there would be no rules to the magic mechanics. But I like how the two sort of organically placed their own rules. I liked this chapter, but it somewhat felt to me like it was missing a 'climax'. Meaning a scene for me to fixate on when finishing. I sort of thought we'd get a pole dancing show where Sam can't control his reactions to a room full of guys watching him. But maybe that is yet to come? I thought when Marc pulled his dick out, most of the suits were going to be straight men from outside the town, and end up all collapsing in orgasm from the show, allowing the group to run away. Of course, this would've also caused Sam to cum uncontrollably and have to be carried out by Marc or Gabe (causing him to cum more lol). But storm powers are cool too :)

9/19/21, 1:29 AM
Thanks! The chapter was a lot longer originally (like twice as long), but I wanted some breathing room for readers to process all the big plot reveals before diving into a big sex scene. The next installment will be soon! It's written, just needs some polish. @Dreamweavr
Anonymous
9/18/21, 9:28 PM
Is Sam's continued decreasing IQ the result of the bubble butt edit Gabe made several chapters ago or am i forgetting something? His drop in intelligence has become really prominent in the recent chapters. Makes for funny inner monologue and situations. Can't wait for the next issue.

9/19/21, 1:23 AM
Oh, his IQ isn't going down! There are just more and more sex-charged edits that are making him horny and distracted all the time (the bubble butt change is definitely a major culprit, although Sam doesn't mind it too much, obviously!). @
Anonymous
9/18/21, 9:24 PM
Great story,,,,can't wait for the next chapter
9/18/21, 4:49 AM
My god, awesome chapter. if I wasn't hooked enough before, then I am now. I can't wait for more. I think you have yourself a new fan.

9/18/21, 11:28 AM
@Jonanator Thank you so much... but if you like this sort of story, I implore you, don't check out my other stories; demons, evil power hungry tyrants, muscle growth and cruel sex... this is the sugar, that's the spice!

9/18/21, 11:59 AM
@HunkLover I have in the past, your truly

9/18/21, 8:29 PM
Truly what? TRULY WHAT!?!!?! I can't stand the anticipation @Jonanator!!

9/18/21, 8:32 PM
@HunkLover truly a great author. I think with this story, you just got yourself a new fan. I am a huge fan of gay love stories. I might ask my Daddy if I can write down ours one day.

9/18/21, 8:40 PM
Aw... that's so lovely of you @Jonanator! Thank you. I hope to one day read your story!

9/18/21, 8:43 PM
@HunkLover thanks🙂 can't wait for more.... and hopefully, you will
9/18/21, 7:51 PM
I'm really enjoying this very creative and sweet story, with the added element of mystery as to what is triggering the transformation. I look forward to what happens next.

9/18/21, 8:30 PM
Aw thanks @Hypnoguy67! It's lovely of you to comment. I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters!
Buckyboi
9/18/21, 3:09 AM
Oh, so Charlie's there to help our protagonist be happy, since it seems like he changes when he's extremely unhappy. I know, I know, no questions will be spoiled in the comments. XD I had a thought last chapter of our hero taking Charlie for a walk while in dog form and suddenly poof! Naked twink on a leash in public. XD Interesting that that sort of happened, although not the way it had played out in my head. XD Charlie is such a good boy!

9/18/21, 11:27 AM
Close, but no cigar @Buckyboi! But I love that you're thinking about it. I had toyed with that idea, if I'm honest, but I think I might have something that feels like a nice way to explain everything... we'll see!

Buckyboi
9/18/21, 6:18 PM
@HunkLover Ah, well, at least I'm getting closer. XD
9/18/21, 5:40 PM
Well, I wish you luck and good writing but this story has gone so far from its original premise that its not fun anymore for me. The change to the two twinks and the super increase in some random foe and the utterly thoughtless edits has made the main character unlikable to me. So yeah, thumbs up, good luck, but this story is not what it was. Which is super sad as I loved the story at the start and eagerly awaited new additions.
9/6/21, 6:08 PM
Wonderfully creative. So sweet and insightful on so many levels. Awesome story telling. So powerful that I felt lonely myself, pining for what they were able to have. If you can invoke that kind of emotion, you're a powerful storyteller!

9/18/21, 4:36 PM
@Stroppy Author If there's anything I love to do, whether fiction or non-fiction, it's to tell stories. I've often felt like I can't do that when also writing smut, but writing this and hearing that it had such an impact on you actually really energises me to keep doing the same (even with the incredibly smutty stories I'm planning to put out next...). I'm sorry you felt lonely, but I'm also warmed that it had that impact. Thanks for the high praise.