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9/19/21, 3:00 AM
What a lovely surprise to see another chapter of this story! I'm quite intrigued by the plot that's developing. What's up with the black suits? What kind of magic does Alice have? What happened to Gabe at the end? I personally love how much more complex the plot outside the two guys has gotten, while Gabe and Sam are continuing to edit the book without a care in the world. I do kind of hate how we don't find out Gabe's edits right away, though. I want to know what he changes, but I guess that's the problem (if you can call it a problem) with following the perspective of only one character. One of my favorite things about this was the description of just how infatuated Sam is becoming with Marc. Especially the description of Marc's bicep. Yum. I could picture it so clearly in my mind. I also liked Marc's "disguise." It felt very Clark Kent and it makes me want Sam to be his Lois Lane. I'm still hoping they get together. Or if nothing else, that Marc gets a happy ending. He's so sweet and I might be more invested in his story than I should be. The only complaint I have, really, is that even though the chapter ended with a nice cliffhanger, something felt missing. I can't put a finger on what, though. I think it might have been a lack of sex? Either way, great chapter, and I eagerly await more.

9/19/21, 3:11 AM
Thanks! Next chapter will be out soon and answer at least one of those questions! It will also be heavier on the sex (I realize this chapter just has some masturbation/light oral). Maybe I should have left the whole chapter in one chunk, it was just *so* long and had so many different scenes that I thought it would be a good idea to let the plot reveals breathe a bit. Maybe let readers speculate a bit. The next chapter (and sex scene) will be soon! @Proteus
9/19/21, 2:27 AM
love it. dive more into the mind control aspect of the necklace.
9/19/21, 2:12 AM
Thanks for the comments!! Tell me what you want to see or ideas (no promises if I use them)...Right now I'm kind of winging it lol
Anonymous
9/18/21, 7:35 PM
Again, this story is so intriguing and fun. The slow burn and culmination of all previous edits coming together makes this extremely enjoyable to read. If every single edit that the main characters made was 100% intelligently thought out there would be no story to speak of. The ever increasing horniness and rash decisions are what make it so interesting to see because you can never know exactly how it will play out. Keep up the fantastic work and I can't wait for more!

9/19/21, 1:52 AM
Thanks! I've always loved wishes gone wrong stories, so I figured I'd give it a go! I also can't resist the urge to plot and worldbuild, so it's nice to see readers enjoying elements coming together! @
Anonymous
9/18/21, 7:47 PM
im obsessed with marc and sams relationship! cant wait for the next one

9/19/21, 1:50 AM
I've had a lot of fun writing it, even though I'm not much of a romance writer! Next chapter will be sometime next week! @
9/18/21, 7:16 PM
To me, the story is just getting better and better. I don't know why negative people can't just keep their non-helpful, non-constructive posts to themselves.

9/19/21, 1:48 AM
Thanks! It's a slow burn, but I'm hoping people enjoy all the threads coming together! @thequirkyone
Anteros
9/19/21, 12:29 AM
This story continues to be one of my favorites on this site. This chapter has some *incredibly* hot sequences and just.... delicious descriptions of Gabe and Marc's new bodies (mmm...), but it's also becoming clearer and clearer the farther we get into the story that *paying attention to small details is rewarding for readers*. There are these little hints that something isn't quite right, and recurring side characters and names which keep coming up... Sam himself is too distracted being horny (who could blame him lol) to really notice most of it but it's so impressive and exciting how much thought you've clearly put into all the little plot details, and I'm so excited to see where it goes from here!!

9/19/21, 1:47 AM
Thanks! This is definitely my most developed story on GSS in terms of time spent brainstorming, world-building, plotting, and taking notes on. @Anteros
SC Walker
9/19/21, 12:50 AM
This has been one of my favorite stories ever, but I'm beginning to feel like it's going off the rails a little bit. The edits are becoming more and more outlandish. It feels less like edits that the characters would actuslly make and more like edits thst the author wanted to make happen. The characters started out reckless and impulsive, but now they just seem like imbeciles. The whole thing is becoming sillier and sillier, I enjoy a light tongue-in-cheek tone, but something sbout Marc having a weather controlling magic dick seems likea separate idea that belonged in its own story but instead is being forced into this one. Maybe it's because this chapter is thefirst half, but it feels pretty incomplete on its own. I have a feeling next chapter will be really good since this chapter is all setup.

9/19/21, 1:35 AM
Things are going off the rails by design! Reality edits are piling up, and unexpected ripples with them. There are tons of notes and plot outlines behind the scenes here. Marc having some outlandish superhero powers was set up last chapter, for example -- and Sam's edit was rooted in his love of comic books. @SC Walker
9/18/21, 11:35 PM
Wow, a truly zany chapter. I just keep getting thirstier and thirstier for when Marc finally gets Sam. Thanks for posting!

9/19/21, 1:30 AM
Thanks! Glad you're appreciating the zaniness! @tenser13
9/18/21, 10:25 PM
I'm really liking the story. I was skeptical at the first chapter since it at first seemed like there would be no rules to the magic mechanics. But I like how the two sort of organically placed their own rules. I liked this chapter, but it somewhat felt to me like it was missing a 'climax'. Meaning a scene for me to fixate on when finishing. I sort of thought we'd get a pole dancing show where Sam can't control his reactions to a room full of guys watching him. But maybe that is yet to come? I thought when Marc pulled his dick out, most of the suits were going to be straight men from outside the town, and end up all collapsing in orgasm from the show, allowing the group to run away. Of course, this would've also caused Sam to cum uncontrollably and have to be carried out by Marc or Gabe (causing him to cum more lol). But storm powers are cool too :)

9/19/21, 1:29 AM
Thanks! The chapter was a lot longer originally (like twice as long), but I wanted some breathing room for readers to process all the big plot reveals before diving into a big sex scene. The next installment will be soon! It's written, just needs some polish. @Dreamweavr