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9/18/21, 6:21 PM
Normally I don't explain easter eggs in my stories, but in case anyone wonders what song Alice's alarms are singing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-FxmoVM7X4&ab_channel=TheArkive

9/19/21, 11:13 AM
@bluesuedewho i got it right away! definitely was not expecting an Electric Six reference in my erotica today.

9/20/21, 1:41 AM
And I certainly didn't expect to write one when I started this story! @Dcguy
9/19/21, 7:58 AM
I love how random and bizarre this story gets sometimes. The weirder the better for me! The stormbringer dick was just *chef's kiss*

9/20/21, 1:40 AM
Glad you're enjoying it! @Norismo
9/19/21, 10:16 PM
They keep mentioning the horny water, but they've stopped accidentally drinking it! Gabe doesn't seem too distracted as Sam is, even though it is a burden for him. If Sam wants to blow him more, he might want to sneak him a few glasses ;)
9/7/21, 12:03 PM
I don't think I have ever read such an amazing turn around from a story that started out with a bully. I was bullied as a kid. Incredibly hot and thought provoking!

9/19/21, 4:56 PM
@Cutlerfan I am so sorry that you experienced that, but I hope this was a more hopeful story for you! I don't know how other "bully" stories tend to go, but redemption is my biggest and most beloved theme, so this one went just as I intended. Also, I'm definitely over the moon that it's both hot and *thought-provoking.* Smut can be art too! Let the world know! Glad you enjoyed.

9/19/21, 6:54 PM
Oh yes, it was a very hopeful story! @Soren Fitz
9/9/21, 2:44 AM
I really enjoyed this! Loved how you incorporated some growth, and I really appreciate the depth you went in the storylines for the characters you created. Very fun read!

9/19/21, 4:57 PM
@Razz TFs Heh, I know my audience! (I think!) I thought people would enjoy the growth bits, and it was fun to add them in. I'm always intending to give the characters in my stories depth and meaning, even when they're also being subjected to the smuttiest of outcomes, so I'm glad that shined through, and I'm hoping to keep doing that in future, even smuttier stories, heh. Thanks for the comment, and I'm happy you had fun!
9/6/21, 9:12 PM
Such an incredibly hot, well-written story! You're a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

9/19/21, 4:54 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know it's not usual GSS fare, so it's good to hear things like "wonderful" anyway.
Martin
9/19/21, 12:11 PM
Are you sure you don't want to crosspost this to GSS?

9/19/21, 1:46 PM
@Martin I must've missed the button but just sent an edit about posting it on GSS. Thanks!
Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:36 AM
i was gonna wait until the whole thing was done to start this, but it looked too exciting and i couldn't help myself. and man, i'm glad i jumped in!! i think i just have too soft a spot for plot, really, especially slightly wild ones. and this story is doing a great job depicting a wishes-gone-wrong scenario that starts really ripping reality apart. there's a sort of worldbuilding through destruction that i really enjoy here. i also have a soft spot for sam's progression. he doesn't feel like a regular guy being thoughtless to me so much as like. somebody who's had so many compounding mental changes that continue to bump into each other that he's not really... capable of thinking things through so to speak. it's not an iq drain practically, but functionally that's what happens when you're extremely sexually keyed up all the time and haven't been able to adjust to fundamental changes to your psyche. and so it makes him more likely to rush into things which makes the whole situation worse. and if there's one thing i like in reality bending stories, it's Difficult Cycles To Work Your Way Out Of. I understand the other feedback and think they would also make for very interesting versions of this story, but personally I like where this is heading a lot. Really excited for part 2 of the chapter, and for the rest of the story in general!!!

9/19/21, 4:06 AM
Thanks! I think that's a really good explanation of how Sam's probably thinking (or failing to think). The next chapter will post sometime next week! @
9/19/21, 2:11 AM
This story is much more chaotic than most stories I prefer, but I actually really like it! It's so different with all the wild unpredictability. To me, it really makes it fun and sexy. Marc is my favorite character and I just want to slap Sam and make him give in to the massive, kind muscle stud. But it is hard to get over those long-built up rivalries in your mind. And the fact that so many edits seem to be making Marc even more powerful in various ways, I love it! My only nitpick, I would really appreciate some sort of indication of just how BIG Marc and Gabe are. Sam constantly comments on how big and muscular they are, can we get a stat or two? Height and/or weight? Or the size of their cocks? :) Thanks for a great and unique story.

9/19/21, 2:38 AM
Thanks, it's planned chaos, I can assure you! And I'm enjoying adding edits pumping up Marc into an irresistible force of nature. I'm *terrible* with picturing what specific height/weight combos look like. I know what the characters look like it my head, but my brain doesn't naturally think to assign specific stats. I imagine they're not *impossibly* huge, just pushing the edge. Don't hold me to these numbers, but rough ballpark, above 6' 6" but under 7', and over 250 lb but under 300 lb? Cocks maybe between 11 and 13 inches long? @dredlifter

9/19/21, 3:40 AM
@bluesuedewho Thanks for the insight! I do bodybuilding myself so I love stats. I completely understand your on the weight. Truthfully, as muscular guys get taller and taller their weights increase a lot faster than you would think. A really big 6'6 bodybuilder would weigh around 300 lbs. A 6'6 muscle jock would be around 250-270. For the sake of your story, just sticking with heights is more than sufficient to help us fill in the gaps, thank you! I also enjoy things like relating their heights to objects. A typical door is 6'8. If they have to duck through the door that gives us an idea of how huge they are! If you ever want some help determining height and weights for big guys in your future stories I'd be happy to help on request! :)

9/19/21, 4:05 AM
Thanks! That's very helpful for someone like me who loves muscle, but is bad with both spatial awareness and measurements. I really like stats when characters are into stats (I can recall reading some really hot measuring scenes) but I don't have much real world experience to inform myself! I figured my weights were more likely to be off than heights. I know muscle is significantly heavier than fat, so a big muscular guy is going to weigh a lot more than height/weight tables would suggest. @dredlifter
9/19/21, 3:00 AM
I've been really drawn to this story, I enjoy the somewhat chaotic progression of the reality edits, the ways that the poorly conceived edits bounce off each other. Many of the individual edits are very very sexy, and I even enjoy the subtle way we're being introduced to the idea that Sam is getting kind of stupid. So I disagree with the more negative comments. But I seriously wish there were more moments of actual, gay, penetrative sex, between two gay men. I'm with everyone else who is eagerly awaiting Sam and Marc finally fucking, but I wish you would slow down a bit, let some of the changes breathe a bit and show us how these wild changes impact Gabe and tertiary characters. The pole dancing major was a fun and sexy idea, but hurrying past this for more and more changes and hurtling toward plot development is a mossed opportunity - this is just one example. Would you ever consider chapters or longer asides that are not from Sam's perspective?

9/19/21, 3:18 AM
Thank you! The chaos is definitely intended to be a feature! Sam was a bit dense at the beginning -- it's not so much that he's getting dumber as the story progresses, he just has lots of sexy distractions from edits. Penetrative sex is going to happen soon (although Sam will still insist that he's "straight"). Some changes, like the pole dancing edit serve multiple purposes! In this chapter, it's meant to show that Sam's edit had immediate unintended consequences, but that change will also definitely ripple forward into future chapters! Sam's pole dancing major is a major feature in a future installment. On the subject of asides, I have at least two "bonus" chapters in drafts, one from Marc's perspective. No ETA on those, but they're in the works! @brium