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9/16/21, 8:15 PM
First time rating on a GCS story, didn't know they have a romance rate instead of mind control. Love the story! 💙💙💙💙 winder how they will continue they relationship? did mermans have their equivalent to human sex? 🤔

9/20/21, 12:04 PM
@Math_Reez 💙 Now that I think about it, they were talking on whether or not they would have sex in that boat ending. At the time, I though a merman would have like a snake a retractable penis. Kelen would be a little weirded out but would have said to Aske that he could use his song to ease him at first. But now, I did my research. Most fishes have sexual organs under their bellies, but with a lot it grow during mating season. So maybe Aske would actually have something like that, but near where a penis is located. And during the reproduction, the female let her eggs fall into the sand (several thousands in one go!) while the male rub himself against the female, letting his sperms touches most of the eggs. So I guess during sex, Aske would humps against Kelen? But it would maybe feel sexual desire some parts of the year? Honestly, I tend to write relationships that are either sexual or romantic, weirdly enough. So I choose to not think too much about it, besides the "it would be weird, and Kelen would need to get used to it". One of the reason I had him think the relationship wouldn't necessarily works on the long term was actually the question of how they could have sex.
9/20/21, 6:47 AM
really like this so far good job i wonder if you're going to do anything for like sam alexander nova or maybe somebody like tim drake robin
9/18/21, 6:21 PM
Normally I don't explain easter eggs in my stories, but in case anyone wonders what song Alice's alarms are singing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-FxmoVM7X4&ab_channel=TheArkive

9/19/21, 11:13 AM
@bluesuedewho i got it right away! definitely was not expecting an Electric Six reference in my erotica today.

9/20/21, 1:41 AM
And I certainly didn't expect to write one when I started this story! @Dcguy
9/19/21, 7:58 AM
I love how random and bizarre this story gets sometimes. The weirder the better for me! The stormbringer dick was just *chef's kiss*

9/20/21, 1:40 AM
Glad you're enjoying it! @Norismo
9/19/21, 10:16 PM
They keep mentioning the horny water, but they've stopped accidentally drinking it! Gabe doesn't seem too distracted as Sam is, even though it is a burden for him. If Sam wants to blow him more, he might want to sneak him a few glasses ;)
9/7/21, 12:03 PM
I don't think I have ever read such an amazing turn around from a story that started out with a bully. I was bullied as a kid. Incredibly hot and thought provoking!

9/19/21, 4:56 PM
@Cutlerfan I am so sorry that you experienced that, but I hope this was a more hopeful story for you! I don't know how other "bully" stories tend to go, but redemption is my biggest and most beloved theme, so this one went just as I intended. Also, I'm definitely over the moon that it's both hot and *thought-provoking.* Smut can be art too! Let the world know! Glad you enjoyed.

9/19/21, 6:54 PM
Oh yes, it was a very hopeful story! @Soren Fitz
9/9/21, 2:44 AM
I really enjoyed this! Loved how you incorporated some growth, and I really appreciate the depth you went in the storylines for the characters you created. Very fun read!

9/19/21, 4:57 PM
@Razz TFs Heh, I know my audience! (I think!) I thought people would enjoy the growth bits, and it was fun to add them in. I'm always intending to give the characters in my stories depth and meaning, even when they're also being subjected to the smuttiest of outcomes, so I'm glad that shined through, and I'm hoping to keep doing that in future, even smuttier stories, heh. Thanks for the comment, and I'm happy you had fun!
9/6/21, 9:12 PM
Such an incredibly hot, well-written story! You're a gifted writer. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story.

9/19/21, 4:54 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know it's not usual GSS fare, so it's good to hear things like "wonderful" anyway.
Martin
9/19/21, 12:11 PM
Are you sure you don't want to crosspost this to GSS?

9/19/21, 1:46 PM
@Martin I must've missed the button but just sent an edit about posting it on GSS. Thanks!
Anonymous
9/19/21, 3:36 AM
i was gonna wait until the whole thing was done to start this, but it looked too exciting and i couldn't help myself. and man, i'm glad i jumped in!! i think i just have too soft a spot for plot, really, especially slightly wild ones. and this story is doing a great job depicting a wishes-gone-wrong scenario that starts really ripping reality apart. there's a sort of worldbuilding through destruction that i really enjoy here. i also have a soft spot for sam's progression. he doesn't feel like a regular guy being thoughtless to me so much as like. somebody who's had so many compounding mental changes that continue to bump into each other that he's not really... capable of thinking things through so to speak. it's not an iq drain practically, but functionally that's what happens when you're extremely sexually keyed up all the time and haven't been able to adjust to fundamental changes to your psyche. and so it makes him more likely to rush into things which makes the whole situation worse. and if there's one thing i like in reality bending stories, it's Difficult Cycles To Work Your Way Out Of. I understand the other feedback and think they would also make for very interesting versions of this story, but personally I like where this is heading a lot. Really excited for part 2 of the chapter, and for the rest of the story in general!!!

9/19/21, 4:06 AM
Thanks! I think that's a really good explanation of how Sam's probably thinking (or failing to think). The next chapter will post sometime next week! @