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Anonymous
9/20/21, 10:52 PM
Love Steve's oblivious transformation so far! Looking forward to part 3!
9/20/21, 11:32 AM
It would be so cruel and funny if Melanie had already been turned gay due to the earlier edits when Sam goes to date her. Although this makes me wonder a few things about this world. Obviously it leans towards making people gay, but how are bi and trans people affected?

9/20/21, 1:42 PM
More people realize that they're bi with experimentation being more common. I haven't thought much about how trans people would be affected since none of the characters are trans, but presumably they'd be more likely to be gay or bi in this reality. @RainbowMika91
9/16/21, 9:53 PM
Nice story. I loved it.

9/20/21, 12:05 PM
Thanks, @Jonanator

Jonanator
9/20/21, 12:07 PM
@BobbyBlobfish welcome. it was awesome. I hope to post today, so be on the lookout. Hope to see more Stories like this. I'm a huge fan of you.
9/16/21, 8:15 PM
First time rating on a GCS story, didn't know they have a romance rate instead of mind control. Love the story! 💙💙💙💙 winder how they will continue they relationship? did mermans have their equivalent to human sex? 🤔

9/20/21, 12:04 PM
@Math_Reez 💙 Now that I think about it, they were talking on whether or not they would have sex in that boat ending. At the time, I though a merman would have like a snake a retractable penis. Kelen would be a little weirded out but would have said to Aske that he could use his song to ease him at first. But now, I did my research. Most fishes have sexual organs under their bellies, but with a lot it grow during mating season. So maybe Aske would actually have something like that, but near where a penis is located. And during the reproduction, the female let her eggs fall into the sand (several thousands in one go!) while the male rub himself against the female, letting his sperms touches most of the eggs. So I guess during sex, Aske would humps against Kelen? But it would maybe feel sexual desire some parts of the year? Honestly, I tend to write relationships that are either sexual or romantic, weirdly enough. So I choose to not think too much about it, besides the "it would be weird, and Kelen would need to get used to it". One of the reason I had him think the relationship wouldn't necessarily works on the long term was actually the question of how they could have sex.
9/20/21, 6:47 AM
really like this so far good job i wonder if you're going to do anything for like sam alexander nova or maybe somebody like tim drake robin
9/18/21, 6:21 PM
Normally I don't explain easter eggs in my stories, but in case anyone wonders what song Alice's alarms are singing: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R-FxmoVM7X4&ab_channel=TheArkive

9/19/21, 11:13 AM
@bluesuedewho i got it right away! definitely was not expecting an Electric Six reference in my erotica today.

9/20/21, 1:41 AM
And I certainly didn't expect to write one when I started this story! @Dcguy
9/19/21, 7:58 AM
I love how random and bizarre this story gets sometimes. The weirder the better for me! The stormbringer dick was just *chef's kiss*

9/20/21, 1:40 AM
Glad you're enjoying it! @Norismo
9/19/21, 10:16 PM
They keep mentioning the horny water, but they've stopped accidentally drinking it! Gabe doesn't seem too distracted as Sam is, even though it is a burden for him. If Sam wants to blow him more, he might want to sneak him a few glasses ;)
9/7/21, 12:03 PM
I don't think I have ever read such an amazing turn around from a story that started out with a bully. I was bullied as a kid. Incredibly hot and thought provoking!

9/19/21, 4:56 PM
@Cutlerfan I am so sorry that you experienced that, but I hope this was a more hopeful story for you! I don't know how other "bully" stories tend to go, but redemption is my biggest and most beloved theme, so this one went just as I intended. Also, I'm definitely over the moon that it's both hot and *thought-provoking.* Smut can be art too! Let the world know! Glad you enjoyed.

9/19/21, 6:54 PM
Oh yes, it was a very hopeful story! @Soren Fitz
9/9/21, 2:44 AM
I really enjoyed this! Loved how you incorporated some growth, and I really appreciate the depth you went in the storylines for the characters you created. Very fun read!

9/19/21, 4:57 PM
@Razz TFs Heh, I know my audience! (I think!) I thought people would enjoy the growth bits, and it was fun to add them in. I'm always intending to give the characters in my stories depth and meaning, even when they're also being subjected to the smuttiest of outcomes, so I'm glad that shined through, and I'm hoping to keep doing that in future, even smuttier stories, heh. Thanks for the comment, and I'm happy you had fun!