Recent Comments

Test
9/23/21, 8:41 PM
I loved Tumblr stories. Good to see they're alive and kicking. This is great

9/23/21, 9:11 PM
Thank you @Test!
Sep 22, 2021
9/23/21, 1:54 PM
You writing is so good! Your descriptions flowed so well; you chose vivid words; it felt like art. And it was hot the whole time (or I’m horny…?) but it’s definitely a fun set-up, especially for vignettes. (If I ever wrote a vignette for it, can I include cum inflation? =P)

9/23/21, 2:46 PM
@Soren go for it! I'm happy to inspire :
9/23/21, 2:05 PM
I haven’t read it all yet, but I wanted to say I love how you blend modernity with fantasy. It’s always fun to hear about universities and credit cards at the same time as advanced magic.
9/23/21, 2:27 AM
Continuing to enjoy this story and looking forward to more. I'm especially curious as to what awaits Jasper in his future training. Great story!

9/23/21, 1:07 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! It's great to know what parts of the story have you curious!
9/23/21, 1:02 AM
hot. can't wait for more.

9/23/21, 1:06 PM
@Jonanator thank you! we look forward to writing more!
Sep 22, 2021
9/22/21, 11:51 PM
Nice story. Will there be more to it?
9/22/21, 11:48 PM
This story shows great promise with extremely likeable characters and the start of some interesting plot lines. Looking forward to where you take the story next!
9/22/21, 11:31 PM
Ooo. I can't wait for more. Hope a part two is coming.
Sep 22, 2021
Martin
9/22/21, 8:42 PM
very intriguing,. Are there more parts coming?
nycboot
9/9/21, 6:31 PM
It's pretty rare that I tear up when reading a story on these sites. But this is one of them. Kudos to Soren Fitz for effecting a change not only in the subject, but in the person that's trying to change him. Very rewarding story!

9/22/21, 6:36 PM
Oh my god, that’s sweet—I didn’t realise my story had that potential to evoke emotion on that level, although I’ll admit I felt something too when I wrote the moment he ran for the picture on the wall. I’m all about growth for all the characters involved—so I’m glad that shined through. Thanks for reading! @nycboot