Recent Comments

9/15/21, 10:42 AM
i really loved this story. its a nice reminder to be brave and make the changes in your life you want to see. Now i need to find my Jet.

9/27/21, 12:13 AM
You and me both! We'll find him, I know it. And in the meantime, we'll keep changing. That's the hope I was trying to instill! I'm glad you enjoyed it; that means a lot to me. @SirD
9/26/21, 9:00 PM
great setup so far. i cant wait to see where this goes!

9/27/21, 12:07 AM
@Behr Thanks! The fun is just getting started.
9/26/21, 4:55 PM
Howdy! I just wanted to leave a quick comment to congratulate you on another wonderful chapter. I adore all the allusions you make to Greek Mythology as well as the care you've put into the names of characters. The prose is of great quality, and I quite like the premise and the world building. I do hope you'll keep it up. I check in every so often to see if there's a new chapter up. Personally, I'm hoping to see Jasper grow to enjoy the trappings of pet life. I did enjoy the sort of casual dominance of having a pet blow a coin under a table, and I'm quite curious whether or not Jasper might grow in time to be as needy and eager as Chal. I am curious what other modifications Aris might impose upon Jasper as well. I rather hope that all those layers of mental manipulation will still leave something that Rhys will like though. Call me a bit of a sap, but although I enjoy watching Jasper's induction into a pet, I rather like that thus far he has been a favored pet--with Rhys being almost "sweet" to him. I'm also quite curious what other realities of this world might make themselves known. In particular, the specifics of Coin societies and what prompted the caste system to exist in this world. I'm also curious to see what might come of the sub-plot with Jasper's old friends. The particulars of Rhys's previous pet are also of interest. I'm quite curious as to what "failed" in that attempt. My best to you and Cuddle-switch for sharing this interesting world with us! Best Wishes, ~Jayden

9/26/21, 7:37 PM
Hi @Jayden It's such a delight to see you pick up on and enjoy the different aspects of the story and the different elements we're working in. We both really appreciated your comment and getting to hear what you think a lot. Thank you so much! We're definitely hoping to work with a lot of the threads that you've mentioned, and some of your questions might even be answered in the upcoming chapters we're working on! From cuddle-Switch: "We may not get into the way that this culture and society evolved directly, but we do consider these questions often and have some ideas about it. Some of that should come out over time in the story! To me, it feels clear that Rhys is not one to be dominant to a long-term partner and not have there be some affection. I'm looking forward to seeing how that evolves, too! Thanks for reading!" Take care, Time & cuddle-Switch
9/26/21, 4:56 PM
So far I have loved this story, since corruption is a favorite subject of mine. However, I'm a little worried, as I found the stories last chapter a little off-putting : can's of veg's talking to the son ??? Was this twist necessary...couldn't Tanner just as easily have visited the grocery store ? Also love the pastor's swearing & masturbating often during the day. Just hope this 'new' behavior continues & spreads to the young men in the group...Time for some good old fashioned circle jerks !! Also how about introducing smoking to the group [and any other bad habits you can come up with ???] Looking forward to the next few chapters !!!
9/26/21, 3:59 AM
Exciting and fun as always!

9/26/21, 2:40 PM
Thanks! It was a lot of fun writing it! @dredlifter
9/26/21, 8:09 AM
Splitting it up was a great idea because we got *two* awesome chapters.

9/26/21, 2:40 PM
Thanks! And that's a relief to hear; some readers thought the last chapter felt incomplete. @Norismo
9/26/21, 1:27 PM
Go Tanner!
9/25/21, 9:22 AM
I've loved every chapter of this thus far, can't wait for more.

9/25/21, 8:34 PM
Thanks! New chapters are in drafts! @NANOwriter

9/26/21, 2:39 AM
@bluesuedewho Awesome!
Team Gabe
9/25/21, 6:36 PM
So as the handle suggests I am actually on Team Gabe, hoping for a bros happy ending. Sorry, Team Marc! After chapter 7 Gabe started to seem jealous as Sam notices Marc, and (maybe?) wished to be a superhero to compete. I also realized apparently all of Sam's sex have be brojobs except for the spontaneous solo orgasms. Well, now that's changed but hopefully Gabe will be tutoring Sam soon in ways that improve his prospects? Gabe may let slip tips for best pleasing an ultra-dom-top while bottoming. I wondered if Sam's last edit, worded "his first mental change" would misfire and undo all the earlier mental changes he edited. Would Marc be straight again, would straight guys getting off to gay porn no longer be a thing, and biggest of all could Sam be turned gay -err, that may still be on the table. Finally, Gabe might be getting wise to indirectly changing Sam, tuning that exercise change to dick-size like that. Maybe some more twinkification will happen by 'accident'? Anyway, I love this story and was checking in all week waiting for this chapter to drop. Thanks!

9/25/21, 7:27 PM
@Team Gabe I agree, they desrive a happy ending

Anonymous
9/25/21, 9:45 PM
@Team Gabe Ooooh, hmmm! I definitely read the "first mental change" thing as just Sam commenting on the fact that this was his first change without physically writing in the book, but it does seem like the changes made that way *hit* a bit differently so I guess there could be side effects? Still, idk, Team Gabe or not I think turning Marc straight again would rob the readers of a lot of hot moments lol...

9/25/21, 10:08 PM
Sorry, I didn't mean for that edit to be vague. Anon is right: it doesn't impact any previous changes with "mental effects" it just lets Sam edit the textbook with his mind going forward. @Team Gabe

Team Gabe
9/26/21, 12:12 AM
@bluesuedewho, oh I certainly didn't expect to be right on that score. I was just having fun speculating how the edit could go sideways and the odd word choice is a driver in these types of stories. You've just got me on the edge of my seat! Actually going that route would have undone two major premises, Sam identifying as straight and Marc as the implied 'will they or won't they'. I hope you don't mind the speculating or sharing of theories gone wrong for a chuckle, I don't mean it as what should have happened or anything.
9/25/21, 10:38 PM
i hope there is catharsis int he end and tanner is defeated. if he wins then ...... *shrugs* this story is not for me. i hate the tanner character.