Recent Comments

10/12/21, 2:29 AM
Very nice story. No matter how much a cunt Charlie was in his past life, I can't tolerate the idea of cursing someone to turn into a dog and having their only thought be "I'm a bad dog". That fucking broke my heart.
10/12/21, 12:48 AM
The term "fuckboy" is anachronistic for the period you portrayed here. I know you're playing in a slightly adjacent alternate universe. I just provide this information as an FYI. It's a good idea to nail down little dialogue details like this when you are going to time jump a story. It can really help sell a jump, or possibly confuse it. Almost all of the curse words that we use now existed in the 70s, 80s, and 90s but people used them less. The further back you go the less frequently they were used and the more shocking they were to the ear.
10/12/21, 12:35 AM
The dog arguing through the kids toy was hilarious but from the perspective of the barista it would have been terrifying. Also, intelligent people take it seriously when a dog communicates (through available means) that they do not like you.
10/11/21, 11:15 PM
What a great pup story. Most, if not all, dog transformation stories are against their will (not complaining). However, you broke that mould by telling a perfect story of transformation and romance, tender but also dark with Charles' past human side. It ended beautifully. 5 Woofs.
10/11/21, 3:43 AM
Damn! This story had me hard right at the beginning! Excellent descriptive writing, Sir. Your attention to detail draws you into the story and keeps you there, lusting for more. I read on for more hairy muscle domination.....
Anonymous
9/25/21, 11:43 AM
waiting for sam and marc have more moments together

9/25/21, 8:35 PM
They get some scenes in the next chapter! @

10/9/21, 7:54 PM
Yay!!!!@bluesuedewho

10/11/21, 12:32 AM
@bluesuedewho yesssss
Anonymous
10/9/21, 6:06 PM
Was just reading this again and this is insanely hot! I can't stop reading it. The way Tanner corrupts Pastor Peter gets me going every time I come back to it.
10/8/21, 11:08 PM
As you know I respect this story and loved it so far. That said, this chapter of jumping back and forth was confusing. I have a slight clue of what's going on (Charlie the dog is Charles the douchebag?) So many first person narratives. I'm glad other readers understood and enjoyed.
Martin
10/5/21, 9:38 PM
Such a cute and hot story... one both feels sad and happy for Nate at the same time :)

10/6/21, 12:39 PM
It’s always an honour when you read my stories, heh. I’m glad you liked it! More is coming, and Nate’s story has some unfolding to do. @Martin
10/5/21, 11:49 AM
nice Story. hope there is more coming.

10/6/21, 9:26 AM
Hi @Jonanator, thanks for your comment - I'm gonna take a bit of a break for now, let my brain cook up some new ideas. But I'll be back when I have a new story! In the meantime, @MisterXIX and I will, at some point continue with our co-written story "The Devil by My Side"!

10/6/21, 10:45 AM
@HunkLover ok, no problem 🙂