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11/6/21, 3:10 AM
This was so good that I want to call the seduction "believable" except it's a literal demonic creature using literal seduction magic. Very hot, flirty, and fun to read. Thanks for posting!
11/6/21, 2:25 AM
what a hot story. love how the ghost or what ever change them from farther & son to brothers. Then to lover's. I really love the whole daddy part.
11/6/21, 1:03 AM
I did enjoy this story, because it was very descriptive in a pretty fun way of a lot of great kinks... but on the other hand, I found it difficult to read at parts. The perspective was shifting very quickly, from 1st person, to 3rd person, and at points even 2nd person, where the reader was David? Maybe it's my bad for reading while high and getting lost, but it took a bit of focus to follow. At parts it seemed like two different versions edited together, where it was morning and Nate was making breakfast, and it was afternoon/evening and he'd ordered pizza.
11/5/21, 4:05 AM
Nice. Can't wait for more.

11/5/21, 6:56 PM
@Jonanator Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
11/5/21, 4:03 AM
Hottt. hope more is on the way.
11/4/21, 5:30 AM
Thank you for the story. Can't wait for more stories about Razz and Derek.

11/4/21, 11:34 PM
@Arty82 Thanks so much! I've already got a follow-up to this one ready to go. The question is if I can actually hold out till the end of November before I post it :P I lost IRL NNN on day 1, so...
11/4/21, 11:27 PM
Fantastic setup! I'd love to see more
Martin
11/4/21, 8:54 PM
A very hot sex scene! And you're writing is really good. I really like those lively imaginative description of scenes!

11/4/21, 11:09 PM
@Martin Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far :)
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11/4/21, 10:52 PM
Brillant opening.
Martin
11/4/21, 9:22 PM
Hot and funny! Can't wait to see where this is going. But from the title, I thought that he would become a incubus by accident... that would be kinda fun, too... :)