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11/7/21, 4:09 AM
might not have updated yet as there are still out of place perspective changes. otherwise great story

11/11/21, 4:20 AM
@Human Dragon Fruit I did some more work on it. Thank you and everyone for the feedback.
Martin
11/10/21, 11:06 PM
This has been a very lovely experience. Cute and really well written. A bit long for my usual taste, but I'm really looking forward to the second chapter!

11/10/21, 11:39 PM
I really appreciate that! Thanks for trying it even despite the length, haha. I’m not sure I could have divided it any further without having no-sex chapters, but hopefully people will still read it! (And thanks for advertising mine and Diego Blue’s Cupid exclusives on Spiral!) I hope you enjoy chapter 2. Chapter 3 should come out in a week or two! @Martin
11/10/21, 10:12 PM
Wow, that's another steamy chapter! I didn't expect the outcome action for this family, but l sure enjoyed the vivid description of the depraved yet oblivious tongue-ass intercourse! Please carry on with Tanner's tour around town in corrupting every family in ever more depraved ways...all in the name of improving them! ;) One thought though, seems like the families visited so far are all like broken/trashy. Are you planning on also "improving" the lives of some more clean-cut, well-behaved families...or perhaps some upper class snobbish ones that need some proper "teaching" in manners? Of course, it is up to you to plan out your story as you wish, I look forward to reading whatever you have on mind for the rest of the congregation! ;)
11/10/21, 6:19 PM
your pacing is so tortuously good!!!

11/10/21, 9:47 PM
@Razz TFs I do know how to keep people hooked!
11/10/21, 2:40 PM
You tease! But that was very good timing and you kept the sexual tempo up just right until the crash. I’m looking forward to seeing if Chris can get over this.

11/10/21, 9:46 PM
@Soren Fitz We love a good tease!
11/10/21, 2:37 PM
This was very fun and very hot, and I’m trying to learn from your work here on how to pace my sex scenes effectively, too! Very well done.

11/10/21, 9:40 PM
@Soren Fitz Great to hear the repsonse is good to the sex scenes. They're by no means perfect, but feel free to take some inspiration from them!
11/10/21, 8:41 PM
Thank you for one more great chapter. I know this is not what many readers wanted or expected. I had a feeling that you would go in another direction, and I am glad for it. It is actually really hot that in some sick twisted way these families are actually getting better thanks to Tanner. James Stuart has turned his life around and has in many regards become a better father for his son. Pastor Pete must surely see the change. If giving in to these sinful and wrong father-son feelings is making these changes happening, then those wrong feelings starts to feel good in the twisted mindsets of these families. It might help the pastor accept his own sick feelings if he sees how much good that can come from them.
Anonymous
11/10/21, 6:20 PM
I'm not usually one into rimming but this was amazing!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
11/9/21, 11:40 PM
Sorry, your a terrific writer & I love the general theme of your story, but since I'm not that into rimming, this was not what I expected. Wish it would have dealt more with the dad's drinking & more general depravity, etc...but your the author so it's not my call. Would have loved for the son to become more like his dad!!!

11/10/21, 3:34 AM
@little tiny tim Thanks for always being so willing to let me know how the reading is going. I hope our tastes align again in the future!

11/10/21, 4:40 PM
@S. Q. Neemie Thank you for being kind enough to read your readers comments...I just felt that since you had made a point of mentioning the dad's heavy drinking & his son's aversion to it in several chapters, Tanner would have taken advantage of this by turning the kid into a heavy drinker himself! I would have loved Tanner to be there to instill new low-moral values in both father & son ! This would have opened the door to some heavy, dirty & debotched drunken sex! Also, the mention of the filthy house offered all sorts of possibilites in the boy starting to accept more of a piggish lifestyle [perhaps even 'gainer-porn???] Other than it being a rimming , B&D & S&M story, I didn't feel the overall perversion I was so looking forward to. Also the father & the pastor might be brought together by Tanner to develop some ideas for their sons 'moral-development'. Of, w course , whatever you come-up with, I'll continue to be a faithfull reader & again 'thank you'...
11/10/21, 9:44 AM
I love how *wholesome* this chapter is in the middle. The Dad being made to turn his life around. And then the massage table, the bottom half dropping away, mirroring the flow of the story... I don't want this story to end for a long time.