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11/15/21, 12:42 PM
have been waiting for this to be released and it didn't disappoint. great story so far and keen to see where you go from here with it. nice mix between plot and sex. curious if tyler gets a mention again now he is free from his poorly worded curse.

11/15/21, 3:55 PM
Thanks! I have notes on Tyler's fate, but they aren't important to the main plot. I'll see if there's a logical place to slip a mention of Tyler in future chapters. @Ganymedes
11/15/21, 6:12 AM
bro?

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
BRO. @Tkhon
11/15/21, 5:51 AM
i literally came 3 times reading this story. ... I do hope theres a happy ending that ends with them as a throuple! i feel bad digging into the specifics because others will do a much better job than me, but i want to say its a fun balance of fun, magic, plot and fun. and while your characters might get bossy or whatever its always for the better and no one seems cruel. though i hope crop tops come back!

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
Thanks! No spoilers, but there's a happy ending planned for all three characters. I'm glad the balance of different elements worked! @Thexshxboi
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...
Oct 30, 2021
Anonymous
11/15/21, 12:49 AM
this was so well written. i really enjoyed it

11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@ Thank you so much I'm very glad you enjoyed the story!
11/14/21, 3:19 PM
This is great! loving the story

Martin
11/15/21, 6:34 AM
@Razz TFs That's great to hear, nothing is more rewarding than knowing that there are people who enjoy my stories. I would love if some of you were to lose some of their protein while reading it... :D
11/14/21, 12:58 PM
really enjoying this so far. looking forward to seeing where you go with this

Martin
11/15/21, 6:32 AM
@KnightStone Me too :) I'm glad that you like it!
Willie Cici
11/15/21, 4:52 AM
Great story, Martin! I can't wait to see where this goes. You can do a lot with an incubus.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:31 AM
@Willie Cici Yes, that scenario has a lot of potential for all kinds of hot events and scenes, I hope I can make something worthwhile out of it. I hope you like the second chapter I've published yesterday. Currently I'm on the third chapter, which starts quite different from what you'd expect (I hope). And this praise coming from you, Willie, means a lot to me!
11/15/21, 3:42 AM
Amazing chapter. Well worth the wait and the length didn't bother me (giggity). I like your Chekov's gun finally getting fired. Tyler is an interesting character. Sure, he was an asshole, but you made him relatable with his wanting to see his parents and being unable to. And honestly, the sex between him and Sam was pretty hot, especially after Sam made his questionable edit. Sam is always getting in his own way with his edits, although his last one did get him closer to learning more about the black suits. Speaking of, the black suits are intriguing. It looks like the old dude is the leader of them. And maybe that old man and the shawl brigade are enemies? I don't know where that is going to go, and I look forward to seeing where you take it. Most especially, I like that Marc has become the savior of Sam and Gabe. Marc having the willpower to overcome the influence of Tyler's texts was brilliant, and I'm glad that Sam and Gabe brought him into the editing the textbook club. And really, I just like how wholesome Marc is. He's adorable, and I just want to cuddle him like a big ol' teddy bear. Great work. I'm excited to read more when you have time to continue. By all means, take your time. Your writing is worth the wait.

11/15/21, 4:25 AM
Thank you! I'm glad the slow-burn plot stuff is coming through! No spoilers, but you're definitely on to something... More soon! I have a very rough draft of the next chapter. Maybe early next month? @Proteus
Anonymous
11/15/21, 3:18 AM
Kind of in love with how slutty Sam is becoming

11/15/21, 4:22 AM
This story has changed a lot since the first idea, but Sam being an (ethical) slut for well-hung gay guys has always been a key feature! @