Recent Comments

Martin
11/17/21, 6:41 AM
I mean... WTF? What an amazing story. There are two elements which are a bit distracting to me - the unbearable religious nonsense and the unrealistic cum Inflation - but it is a testimony to your amazing writing that these didn't lessen the enjoyment to read your story one bit. I'm lying on a public beach in my speedos, thinking it should be safe enough to read your Cupid story there. Wrong. I ended up with a huge dark spot on my bulged speedo for everyone to see. You bad boy, Soren! I almost forgot to continue reading this, thank you for reminding me in your other story. It would have been a real loss. This is so wholesome, so real, so empathic, so lovely, so cute. Thank you.

11/17/21, 7:24 AM
Ahhhh, this makes me so happy to hear! I understand the religious nonsense is unbearable, haha, and I don’t believe a word of it myself, but it’s because I wanted the story to be real and empathic that I included it and tried to be as authentic as possible. I’m glad that that authenticity shines through everywhere else. Seriously, this is such high praise! I was worried that because of the slow burn it wouldn’t keep people engaged. I’m glad it did anyway. Ah, I only wish there was more traffic to Cupid—but, hey, hopefully more people come from The Prince and the Frat Boys and see this! Either way, I’m proud of my work and glad that you appreciated it. Comments like these give me life enough to keep on writing and writing. (And I hope you enjoy P&FB 2 if you read it!) (Also, there’s a chapter 3 of this story, just so you know!) @Martin
11/17/21, 3:42 AM
Sexy. Sexy stuff.

11/17/21, 4:04 AM
Thanks! <3 Already working on chapter 3, and I hope to keep delivering. @Heru Kane
11/16/21, 3:35 PM
Gahhh I just absolutely love this series. The scenes with Robin and Isaac are so sweet while being amazingly lewd and hot. Gotta say, the build up to Robin giving Isaac a full load is getting me excited. Hell, at this point, same for Isaac to Gabe. Also, it looks like we're working towards my FAVORITE solution to a love triangle situation!! I was wondering if Gabe would be Isaac's fairy gay mother and then poof away, but I like this direction *way* more. I looooved them chatting in the jacuzzi too. Lots of good character building for the friend group. Curious if there's going to be a conflict/confrontation at any point with Jonny and Chrissy before everyone leaves for the night.

11/16/21, 10:17 PM
Comments like these make me feel so affirmed in my ability to write! I’m glad you love it, and that the build-up is going well. If there’s anything I want it’s to invest readers into my characters. You’ve also given me some fun ideas… I’m looking forward to implementing them! I think these characters will end up showing up more often than just this birthday party, after all. @Razz TFs
11/15/21, 10:12 PM
Two chapters in and I am totally hooked on this story. Martin, I don't know how you do it. Stories like this AND run the site. Kudos sir.

Martin
11/16/21, 3:03 AM
@Beaner Thank you so much! It's what I like to do and nothing is more rewarding than seeing that people are getting something out of what I'm doing! 😘
11/15/21, 2:50 PM
The fun of discovery here is lovely! I liked how you described his new experiences as an incubus, and how he began to adjust to it out of need and hunger. Life as a sex fiend will certainly be interesting, with its differing daily demands from being a human!

Martin
11/16/21, 3:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Thank you so much Soren! I think this is a criminally underexplored viewpoint, with most stories putting their focus on the incubus's victims only... never even seeing the other side of the coin! I have so many ideas which want to come out, I just can't type fast enough and I struggle to find the time. But I'm really happy that you and so many others like to share this fantasy with me 😊
11/15/21, 2:42 PM
This was such a fun ride!!! I loved the world-building; I loved the banter and how you built up their relationship; I loved Will, just, because he’s Will, lol, this is my first glimpse of him (unless he was the guy when Derek gets turned into a cocksleeve); I loved the subtle homoeroticism everywhere which really kept the tempo up. Also, the little touches are so interesting! Do you have a background in French? You seem to know how much they care about the accent. And I adore the physics—dimensional travel limited by the speed of light, the idea that extra dimensional art has cool symmetries we can’t see… And of course, how Derek analysed his own feelings and understood why Razz wasn’t manipulating him. This is so cute and feels like a really truly *gay* romance.

11/15/21, 7:17 PM
@Soren Fitz ahhh thank you! yes, Will did have a "cameo" in the Cocksleeve story. i do have a degree in french and studied abroad in paris. i don't get to use those skills IRL too often so, oops, it's leaking into my writing! and thanks for nerding out with me on the physics. i actually have all sorts of headcanons for how razz's magic works in this universe. im trying to find little windows in the stories to trickle those details in.
11/15/21, 12:42 PM
have been waiting for this to be released and it didn't disappoint. great story so far and keen to see where you go from here with it. nice mix between plot and sex. curious if tyler gets a mention again now he is free from his poorly worded curse.

11/15/21, 3:55 PM
Thanks! I have notes on Tyler's fate, but they aren't important to the main plot. I'll see if there's a logical place to slip a mention of Tyler in future chapters. @Ganymedes
11/15/21, 6:12 AM
bro?

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
BRO. @Tkhon
11/15/21, 5:51 AM
i literally came 3 times reading this story. ... I do hope theres a happy ending that ends with them as a throuple! i feel bad digging into the specifics because others will do a much better job than me, but i want to say its a fun balance of fun, magic, plot and fun. and while your characters might get bossy or whatever its always for the better and no one seems cruel. though i hope crop tops come back!

11/15/21, 3:52 PM
Thanks! No spoilers, but there's a happy ending planned for all three characters. I'm glad the balance of different elements worked! @Thexshxboi
11/15/21, 1:45 AM
So hot. I love the backstory added via Chad learning about being an incubus via a website. Chad figuring out his powers and what he can do with them in the moment was great, too. I'm looking forward to more of his adventures and transformations into various hot men.

Martin
11/15/21, 6:37 AM
@Proteus Yeah, I tried to put myself into his shoes and went from there. Reading instructions from a site (which he's only scanning, as most people would) was another way to explain the boring details... while leaving enough room for him to learn by doing and being surprised every now and then, too. I really love the idea to see an unsuspecting, somewhat clumsy guy being thrown into this situation...