Recent Comments

Anonymous
11/18/21, 11:34 AM
Great start, can't wait for more!

11/18/21, 4:10 PM
Thanks! If you have anything you'd like to see let me
11/16/21, 7:00 PM
Really enjoying this story! i liked the way you worked the exposition in an entertaining way. The story is building nicely Fun read!

Martin
11/18/21, 6:28 AM
@absman420 Thank you, as always, your criticism means a lot to me. I always have the feeling that my language skills are lacking, I don't have nearly enough ways to express myself properly. Especially when it come to speaking like real person would... In my next chapter I plan to add Hooligan-like straight brickheads to my story but I don't think I can reproduce their way of talking properly... :(
11/18/21, 3:05 AM
This series hits the perfect balance of sweet and squirmy for me! I love the seamless blend of mind-bending, literally addictive sex and cum with supportive relationships. It's a rare combo! Also, there aren't nearly enough stories out there with such in-depth world building. Kudos on creating a very hot, very creative setting! I'm glad we got to see more Johnny -- I'm not sure if I'm more obsessed with Seeders or Firecrackers as an erotic concept...

11/18/21, 3:39 AM
Coming from someone who’s written such an exceptional world and thought so deeply about it yourself, this means so much! Thank you! If there’s one thing I always love, it’s happy endings for everybody, and I think that plays into the blend of hypersexuality and fraternity here. Consummation (the world) is built to be a place where everyone can be safe, fulfilled, and happy, and I’ve been working on shaping it for over a year now. I’m glad it’s paying off. Also, I’m glad you’re into Firecrackers as much as Seeders—Firecrackers used to be something that would have been a lot less palatable to a general audience, but I feel like I’ve hit the jackpot (after like, a year of looking for it) with this magical addiction/irresistible domination combo. Again, means a lot from you, knowing how great your stories are! (By the way, once I’ve laid out Seeders and Firecrackers and their ins and outs and clarified things about Consummation more fully, if your obsession leads to inspiration, feel free to write a vignette or more and I’ll link it from a chapter of P&FB. This series will be going for a while…) @bluesuedewho
RedPen
11/17/21, 7:27 PM
Hot stories just being hot is one thing, but this series is pure epic. Absolutely love the episodic writing style this has developed (e.g. each chapter has become its own mini plotline in an overarching main plotline / has its own rising action, resolution, falling action). The plot is smoothly interwoven with great scenes, and the callbacks to earlier minor details show you have a clear picture in your mind of all the related elements. Not just hot, but a great read.

11/18/21, 3:14 AM
Thanks! I definitely couldn't have pulled this story off with lots of behind-the-scenes notes/plotting and help from editors. @RedPen
Anonymous
11/14/21, 9:07 PM
Amazing - love how obsessed the bros are with Sam's nips 🥰😍

11/18/21, 3:08 AM
Thanks! @
Carmelo
11/14/21, 1:56 AM
Really enjoying your story Kods! I hope we get to read more soon! I can't wait to read what Darius has in store for Nick!

Kods
11/16/21, 3:12 AM
Yes I hope to get back to this soon! I was working on a side project, but I'm just about done with that.

Carmelo
11/18/21, 12:50 AM
@Kods Thanks for replying! That means a lot to me!
11/17/21, 6:12 AM
Can't wait for more.

11/17/21, 7:27 AM
I’m working on it now, haha! Hopefully I don’t take two months to do it like last time. I really got distracted by Isaac Wilson’s Birthday Party. @Jonanator

Martin
11/17/21, 8:01 AM
@Soren Fitz Which is totally justifying the wait. Anyone who hasn't done so yet should check it out! [Isaac Wilson’s Birthday Party](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/series/show/10001304)
Martin
11/17/21, 6:41 AM
I mean... WTF? What an amazing story. There are two elements which are a bit distracting to me - the unbearable religious nonsense and the unrealistic cum Inflation - but it is a testimony to your amazing writing that these didn't lessen the enjoyment to read your story one bit. I'm lying on a public beach in my speedos, thinking it should be safe enough to read your Cupid story there. Wrong. I ended up with a huge dark spot on my bulged speedo for everyone to see. You bad boy, Soren! I almost forgot to continue reading this, thank you for reminding me in your other story. It would have been a real loss. This is so wholesome, so real, so empathic, so lovely, so cute. Thank you.

11/17/21, 7:24 AM
Ahhhh, this makes me so happy to hear! I understand the religious nonsense is unbearable, haha, and I don’t believe a word of it myself, but it’s because I wanted the story to be real and empathic that I included it and tried to be as authentic as possible. I’m glad that that authenticity shines through everywhere else. Seriously, this is such high praise! I was worried that because of the slow burn it wouldn’t keep people engaged. I’m glad it did anyway. Ah, I only wish there was more traffic to Cupid—but, hey, hopefully more people come from The Prince and the Frat Boys and see this! Either way, I’m proud of my work and glad that you appreciated it. Comments like these give me life enough to keep on writing and writing. (And I hope you enjoy P&FB 2 if you read it!) (Also, there’s a chapter 3 of this story, just so you know!) @Martin
11/17/21, 3:42 AM
Sexy. Sexy stuff.

11/17/21, 4:04 AM
Thanks! <3 Already working on chapter 3, and I hope to keep delivering. @Heru Kane
11/16/21, 3:35 PM
Gahhh I just absolutely love this series. The scenes with Robin and Isaac are so sweet while being amazingly lewd and hot. Gotta say, the build up to Robin giving Isaac a full load is getting me excited. Hell, at this point, same for Isaac to Gabe. Also, it looks like we're working towards my FAVORITE solution to a love triangle situation!! I was wondering if Gabe would be Isaac's fairy gay mother and then poof away, but I like this direction *way* more. I looooved them chatting in the jacuzzi too. Lots of good character building for the friend group. Curious if there's going to be a conflict/confrontation at any point with Jonny and Chrissy before everyone leaves for the night.

11/16/21, 10:17 PM
Comments like these make me feel so affirmed in my ability to write! I’m glad you love it, and that the build-up is going well. If there’s anything I want it’s to invest readers into my characters. You’ve also given me some fun ideas… I’m looking forward to implementing them! I think these characters will end up showing up more often than just this birthday party, after all. @Razz TFs