Recent Comments

11/20/21, 1:09 AM
I can't wait for Sam and Marc!
11/19/21, 3:17 PM
Oh my god, this was so hot the entire way through! You hit so many of my kink buttons with the cum glazing and the cum inflation (🥵🥵🥵), and you executed the montage perfectly. I don’t think people comprehend the power of a montage to turn an event from being repetitive in literal time to being highly erotic when considering its whole length at once. I thought the romance was sweet, and even though chastity isn’t my kink, you used it to make the whole sense and flow of the story more erotic so I knew something amazing was going to happen when the cage was gone. Great job all around. You’re such a good writer, and I hope this gets lots of clicks despite being a Cupid exclusive!
11/19/21, 2:54 PM
can't wait for more.
11/19/21, 12:43 AM
Absolutely love it. Everything here is so fun and sexy. I love how you build the world so well that your in-universe terms become extremely erotic. You've done an amazing job with developing the relationships for the reader to enjoy. Can't wait for more!

11/19/21, 2:10 AM
Ahhh, thanks for the glowing endorsement! I guess I never thought of it that way—that I could actually instil the readers with the concepts so they found them hot despite them not being real? And now I’m actively thinking about making sure I have that effect, haha. More world building coming soon… @Razz TFs
11/18/21, 6:16 PM
I hope to see another chapter! reminds me of things i would have wanted to wish to happen if i had a magical genie. All the fun safe, weird things I'd want to do. 100% appreciate this story, in that id be the same way... wanting to try out the limits off what his powers could do with my own fantasies. knowing that it's done in a way where I couldn't be hurt in the long run! Hope you write more on this!!

11/18/21, 8:17 PM
@Jojojojojojo Thank you! i feel very similarly and that's my inspiration for writing this couple, haha. I've been putting more of their backstories/shenanigans on gay cupid stories if you want to give them a look! [Here's my most recent](https://www.gaycupidstories.com/series/show/10001328).
Oct 30, 2021
Lohengrin
11/17/21, 8:22 AM
This piece stands on its own merits as a really well written short story quite beyond its gay interest. Very well developed characters and believable plot, even with the fantasy element--and that's hard to do. How come this is not for sale on Kindle? It would be quite competitive with the drivel they generally peddle there, and frankly, it's better than anything I've paid good money for. TTFN, LOHENGRIN

Anonymous
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
@Lohengrin Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story
Oct 30, 2021
Papa Werebear
11/18/21, 7:51 PM
Thanks so much, you're very kind. I hadn't really considered putting this on Amazon for sale, but that's an interesting idea. I generally make them available without charge but if people would be willing to buy them, I'm OK with that. If you're interested, more stories are available @ https://thewritingbearscave.blogspot.com Thank you again and I'm so very glad you liked the story
Anonymous
11/18/21, 11:34 AM
Great start, can't wait for more!

11/18/21, 4:10 PM
Thanks! If you have anything you'd like to see let me
11/16/21, 7:00 PM
Really enjoying this story! i liked the way you worked the exposition in an entertaining way. The story is building nicely Fun read!

Martin
11/18/21, 6:28 AM
@absman420 Thank you, as always, your criticism means a lot to me. I always have the feeling that my language skills are lacking, I don't have nearly enough ways to express myself properly. Especially when it come to speaking like real person would... In my next chapter I plan to add Hooligan-like straight brickheads to my story but I don't think I can reproduce their way of talking properly... :(
11/18/21, 3:05 AM
This series hits the perfect balance of sweet and squirmy for me! I love the seamless blend of mind-bending, literally addictive sex and cum with supportive relationships. It's a rare combo! Also, there aren't nearly enough stories out there with such in-depth world building. Kudos on creating a very hot, very creative setting! I'm glad we got to see more Johnny -- I'm not sure if I'm more obsessed with Seeders or Firecrackers as an erotic concept...

11/18/21, 3:39 AM
Coming from someone who’s written such an exceptional world and thought so deeply about it yourself, this means so much! Thank you! If there’s one thing I always love, it’s happy endings for everybody, and I think that plays into the blend of hypersexuality and fraternity here. Consummation (the world) is built to be a place where everyone can be safe, fulfilled, and happy, and I’ve been working on shaping it for over a year now. I’m glad it’s paying off. Also, I’m glad you’re into Firecrackers as much as Seeders—Firecrackers used to be something that would have been a lot less palatable to a general audience, but I feel like I’ve hit the jackpot (after like, a year of looking for it) with this magical addiction/irresistible domination combo. Again, means a lot from you, knowing how great your stories are! (By the way, once I’ve laid out Seeders and Firecrackers and their ins and outs and clarified things about Consummation more fully, if your obsession leads to inspiration, feel free to write a vignette or more and I’ll link it from a chapter of P&FB. This series will be going for a while…) @bluesuedewho