As ever excellent and so horny

Sensuous, slow burn - great job!

Now that was certainly unexpected... Perfectly written as usual and now I'm even more curious how this will end... Are.you just writing this or did you have this story lying around for a while aready?

I love a good story with the power of love

So cute! And I can't wait to see where it's heading... I just hope that Brett doesn't get excluded with Owen's and Stefan's big revelation. (BTW, Stefan is the name of my cousin who I had a crush on since my teens and who turned out to be gay as well - as I only learned many years later).

I'm glad he helped a guy come out. Me thinks his "friends" need a visit from Chad as well.

Would love to see Chad go after the OTHER two "friends" of Soren. Hey, he smelled them on Soren anyway and he needs to fuck some more. 😁

What a wonderful chapter addition. I continue to marvel at you and cuddle's detail work put into world building. I particularly liked how Jasper asked for something that Rhys couldn't just snap his fingers and deliver, and the sort of protective response it drew from Rhys. Adding an element of vulnerability into the otherwise unassailably powerful coins adds a unique texture which I think may prove a useful nucleation point (in terms of Zeus's affliction). Although there are often power imbalances which favor the "dom" (Rhys), I do appreciate it when there is an avenue for vulnerable inroads for character building. It tends to add color to what otherwise might be somewhat monochromatic. The current trajectory of their relationship definitely tends towards something more meaningful than what might be otherwise implicit in the designations of "Owner" and "Pet" at the surface level which is far more interesting to me. I shall personally continue to hope this trend continues :) I also appreciate how Rhys is perceptive enough to notice the changes in Jasper. It seems like it should become obvious to him over time that something unusual is occurring. I do wonder what his reaction would be to knowing what was being done to Jasper. I am quite delighted that you have delved into the specific of Rhys's past pet. It does seem rather like this fact coupled with Aris's current modifications to his pet might have an interesting culmination--or even argument--between Rhys and Aris. Up to this point, it has been explored how good it feels to Jasper when Rhys is pleased. I am curious what a negative emotion (not necessarily directed at Jasper) might engender within Jasper. Backstory work is always welcome. Thus far, we have seen lots of scenes where Rhys and Jasper have been out amongst others. I am quite curious what measure of domestic interactions this absolute adoration might bring forth. And of course, to see how the gradual restoration of the silver river might provide an ongoing plot point. I absolutely tip my hat to you both for continuing to write all of this so well and work in lovely allusions. Your RPs must be really special to create such a vivid story. I am agog to see what happens next. I was quite delighted to see a new chapter appear and shall eagerly await your next installment Cheers and Thanks, ~Jayden

@time.to.occur i agree completely with all the positive comments you have been receiving! i admit that i have what i consider a huge advantage over these other unfortunate readers. Since i didn't find your story until today, i already know i still have 6 more chapters all ready to read!! i figure that at your average publishing rate of 2 chapters per month, if i ration my reading to 3 chapters per month, i will still have about 4 months to be thrilled by this wonderfully enthralling story. The biggest problem with this plan is that since I already have an uncontrollable addiction to the characters, the plot, and all the intrigue (and sex to come?) in between, i expect i will finish the entire thing by sometime tomorrow. i think i might be in big trouble...

Great Start! I hope that woman creature gets punished for being so rude and condescending! Maybe a lifetime as a human?