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Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/28/21, 1:58 PM
This story needs a sequel. it should have more chapter.
boi98229
11/27/21, 10:37 PM
Oooops! i hope you weren't expecting me to wait for permission... ;)))) This story is impossibly hot! Really, what else did you expect? ...i think i might need some more mind control training.

11/28/21, 5:06 AM
@boi98229 Oh, you know, these mind control stories have a way of leaving their imprint. I'm sure you'll get by without further training ;). What a joy and privilege to have such a dedicated reader -- we're glad you've enjoyed the story so much so far! Really glad to hear that you're finding it hot ^^! From @Cuddle-switch: "We've started to write the next chapter and are about 2300 words in. I would be curious to hear about what you think the Golden Lattice ceremony is, and see how it compares to what we have planned!"
11/28/21, 1:47 AM
Great story so far. I hope good things happen.

11/28/21, 3:40 AM
@Cutlerfan yeah this is going to be more in the romance/drama direction of things. I'm hoping to get to the steamy fun stuff (for Caleb *and separately* for his dads!) in the next few chapters as he navigates this little secret of his.
11/27/21, 7:15 PM
Definitely should have a sequel or another chapter showing Joe change someone!

Dylan
11/28/21, 12:03 AM
@Cutlerfan Thx sir..right now im new here and working to edit my own stuff to improve mistakes i found . But soon this story will go on!
boi98229
11/26/21, 5:02 AM
i do love a slow burn! The seduction is so much sweeter. i feel like the story is building and i'm being edged psychologically. It feels good, but as good as it feels, there is still that drive to bring it on. That said, i am off to the next chapter. (@time.to.occur Thanks for this one!)

11/27/21, 5:29 AM
@boi98229 Thank you! Glad that you're still reading and enjoying, and hope these next chapters help give you some of that sweet, sweet payoff! From Cuddle-switch: "The psychological edging is both happenstance and part of the point -- the pacing of the sex has to obey the rhythm of the story to some degree, and the story is our main driving force. However, we were still disappointed that we couldn't find a 'natural' way to put a proper sex scene in this chapter." ...Which is why Chapter 6 is basically all the sex! I think that for both of us, being invested in the character and narrative makes the power dynamics and the sensual parts that much hotter. It definitely takes more time to get there than the average story on here, though! Hopefully we can sprinkle enough sexy bits between the "sexy" plot to make it enjoyable.

boi98229
11/27/21, 8:21 AM
@time.to.occur It is said that sex is mostly in the mind. How can the mind get wound up without understanding the context in which the relationship evolves and sexual tensions escalate? For me there has been "psychological edging" starting with the original conversation between Rhys and Jasper at the concert, and jumped dramatically when Jasper was caught and subjected to the new mind control technique. Every time Rhys and Jasper experience a moment of special connection and Jasper learns to trust Rhys more deeply and enjoy more freely, the thought of being a pet starts to feel less wrong and more right. Those are all important steps in Jasper's true submission and the power shifts in their relationship. For me, the seduction in an evolving D/s relationship is this shift in power, and every bit as arousing as the pure sex scenes. This psychological shift is, again, for me anyway, a huge part of the context that makes the sex scenes that much hotter.

11/27/21, 10:52 PM
@boi98229 That's delightful to hear, and Cuddle-switch and I both agree with that sentiment pretty well completely. It both increases the stakes of the sex scenes and gives meaning to particular acts. From Cuddle-switch: "This person gets it."
11/26/21, 9:58 PM
Marky Mark and that add was my sexual awakening and the first "naughty" thing I could get my hands on to jerk off. Hot touch.

Dylan
11/26/21, 11:45 PM
@Essex Yeah..i still love that picture. And Boogie Nights was fun ;-)
11/26/21, 8:20 AM
As ever excellent and so horny

Dylan
11/26/21, 1:01 PM
@incaerau Thx for your kind comment , sir ! Anybody wants to see more of Johnny/Mark and Joe?
11/26/21, 1:00 PM
Sensuous, slow burn - great job!
Martin
11/26/21, 7:14 AM
Now that was certainly unexpected... Perfectly written as usual and now I'm even more curious how this will end... Are.you just writing this or did you have this story lying around for a while aready?

11/26/21, 12:29 PM
@Martin this one is a GCS exclusive! I've been wanting to work out the dynamics of an mpreg romantic storyline for a little while now and this is the combination of ideas that "clicked" for me. More to come, probably in a little bit, and it'll get nice and steamy from here on out - we've got all the exposition and characterization sorted out now so the fun can begin!
Nov 26, 2021
Anonymous
11/26/21, 9:05 AM
I love a good story with the power of love