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12/4/21, 6:37 PM
this just seems mean
12/2/21, 11:02 PM
Just found the series, and started with the final chapter, as one does. Then read through all the previous ones. Great work! Love the team in their slutty uniforms.

12/3/21, 10:52 PM
@TickledPink Means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers!

12/4/21, 1:11 PM
@Jack Milligan well thank you, that's great to hear. And I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the swim team. Hopefully they realise that the freedom of being dressed in a skimpy speedo shouldn't just be restricted to the pool, they can be scantily clad sluts anywhere! Keep it up!
12/4/21, 6:49 AM
this might just be me but i really want to see Jay hypnotized as well
12/2/21, 11:15 PM
Love the way you ended things with the rugby team. plus the epilogue at the end makes me hope you have something in mind for a new story involving the swim team.

12/3/21, 10:52 PM
@Redcoma100 I wanted to leave it open but I don't have anything that would make it unique enough yet. If anyone has any ideas feel free to send them my way!
12/3/21, 2:53 PM
As much as I low-key like the idea of Whit getting this "ultimate power" idea conceptually - i love where this is going and cant wait to see more! could make for a good inflection point with two alternate outcomes...
12/2/21, 12:45 AM
My boyssssssss!!! Ugh they're just so sweet and cute together, but this was *fucking hot* too. Loved the double bellies, and good job teaching Isaac that switches have more fun! Your descriptions are so great, with the right balance of realism and kink. Eager for those epilogue stories, but also eager for Halloween Hunt. I know it's gonna be good.
Martin
12/1/21, 10:24 PM
Thank you so much for this hot fapping session!

12/1/21, 11:40 PM
Now *that’s* some praise that makes my day. I’m glad it was hot… and useful! =P @Martin
12/1/21, 8:03 AM
I'm interested in how the story originally went. There wasn't a lot of build up to the old man, and the story speed up this chapter. It was still very good and creative, but definitively feel like changes were made during writing (that happens to me all the time).

12/1/21, 6:53 PM
@BobbyBlobfish Honestly, my hope was that the audience would respond with opinions and things they'd like to see so I could spend longer on the conversions and showcase a variety of transformations. Which was silly in retrospect. I didn't have the imagination to successfully populate the story with unique kinks and conversions so I decided to speed it up and end it soon.
12/1/21, 3:49 PM
Your mastery of sensuality is *delicious*. This was so fucking hot the whole time, especially the sex scene; I couldn’t get enough. Can’t wait to read more!
12/1/21, 1:58 PM
Oh my *god,* this was so fucking hot from beginning to end! I loved Razz cumflating Derek’s udder (and the massive cock), I loved the montage-type scene of Derek getting milked all night—I’m a sucker for describing things as lasting a long time—I loved the hypermasculinity transformation; it was all so good. Looking forward to more!