Recent Comments

12/5/21, 4:00 PM
This was so incredibly sensual, god! I loved it. I think I have a lot to learn from your smut writing… and I might read this again a few times just to make sure I’ve gleaned what, er, loads of knowledge I can.
Nov 26, 2021
11/28/21, 5:59 AM
true love is really rare in this site, thats why i love this.

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
True love conquers all!
Nov 26, 2021
11/29/21, 7:30 AM
I have to say I really enjoyed reading this story, normally i dont read "Jock" stories. some on here might not agree with me, but i do like story lines that involve turning gay men into straight men, OK I know at the end of this both reverted back to being gay -

Kods
12/5/21, 2:49 PM
Thanks for your reply, I do think 'gay to straight' storylines can be...complicated. I wanted to addresses it for myself in story form and show my own take on it.
Nov 26, 2021
11/26/21, 3:05 PM
WOW! What an amazing story! It reads like a deconstruction of the "older guys become bros" tales that are all over this site. What happens to the lives that get left behind when those changes happen? Families, coworkers...as the intro says, our lives are not just our own. We connect to so many others; this story is a reminder of that. And I'm a sucker for happy endings, so I love that Elias loses and Steve and Daniel win! The love they felt for their child transcended any selfish power...thank you for this wonderful surprise. :)

Kods
12/5/21, 2:28 PM
Well, you pretty much nailed it on the head, what else is there left to say.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 1:46 AM
I was pretty worried there for a bit but I loved the ending!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:25 PM
Haha, had you going for the that first half, didn't I? but yeah had to make sure these two got what they truly deserved.
Nov 26, 2021
11/27/21, 6:03 AM
Honestly, I ***almost*** stopped reading half way through because I thought it was going to be the usual dumb jock story. I will do that with stories that lose me, I won't finish them. BUT once I hit the part about the now straight bros and what they were going to do with a little bro hanging around, I thought it might be kinda comedic seeing two less than sharp guys trying to take care of a kid. I'm glad I read through to the end, it was a nice twist on a seriously tired genre! Honestly, the dumbing down as you get muscles thing has just been done to death. Yeah, they ended up dumber, but I liked how it ended. VERY well written and I enjoyed the story!

Kods
12/5/21, 2:22 PM
Thank you once again for your kind comments! I did think having two clueless bros trying to take care of a kid would be funny. I'm also glad you enjoyed the twist and don't worry they're not too dumb.
12/4/21, 2:32 PM
Really enjoying this story so far! I like the worldbuilding and the ties to some of the other Priapus lore that's been developped in other stories on the site. Ariel and Raavi have a very sweet (and hot) connection, and Talley seems like a fun little mischief-maker. There's some meta stuff and definition/exposition in here about different roles that I think is necessary but that comes across as a bit of an info dump rather than fitting quite as organically in the story, but I understand why its there. Great work! I'm looking forward to more!

12/4/21, 2:41 PM
I’m glad you noticed the Priapist connection! More on that as time goes on. Where did you see those bits? I’d love to do some edits to correct them. I think I intended to change them but forgot. Would you say that the times when I describe (1) the effect of secondhand Firecracker cum on those who swallow it and (1) the role of Sirens are most inorganic? Are there any others? Thanks so much for this praise! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. @time.to.occur

12/4/21, 3:08 PM
I just published an update to several portions—the effect of secondhand cum, the role of Sirens, street showers (just removed the entire redundant exposition point there) and when Ariel describes how he came into being a Firecracker toward the beginning with Raavi. If you have the time, please let me know if it flows better, but no worries either way! @time.to.occur

12/4/21, 9:40 PM
@Soren Fitz Those were exactly the parts that had stood out to me, and I think you've done a great job of keeping the information in while letting the reader connect those last dots!
12/4/21, 6:37 PM
this just seems mean
12/2/21, 11:02 PM
Just found the series, and started with the final chapter, as one does. Then read through all the previous ones. Great work! Love the team in their slutty uniforms.

12/3/21, 10:52 PM
@TickledPink Means a lot coming from one of my favorite writers!

12/4/21, 1:11 PM
@Jack Milligan well thank you, that's great to hear. And I'm looking forward to seeing where you take the swim team. Hopefully they realise that the freedom of being dressed in a skimpy speedo shouldn't just be restricted to the pool, they can be scantily clad sluts anywhere! Keep it up!
12/4/21, 6:49 AM
this might just be me but i really want to see Jay hypnotized as well