Recent Comments

12/10/21, 3:50 AM
Wow, this chapter was very, very hot! Nicely done -- great tension and anticipation!

12/10/21, 3:11 PM
Thanks! I’m glad I was able to get the right erotic atmosphere across. I’m hoping to continue to improve in those areas. @time.to.occur

12/11/21, 12:41 PM
@Soren Fitz well it got me nice and hard, so well done!

12/11/21, 3:29 PM
Hell yeah! That's always good to hear. @Dace
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12/11/21, 12:54 AM
Need Dr. Darkness to get knocked up for real
12/7/21, 10:58 PM
With those tags I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did. And I loved the twist at the end. I also enjoyed having to write to tags I wouldn't normally. It allowed me to explore new areas through my writing. Awesome job man, and you were much closer to the word limit suggestion.

12/7/21, 11:02 PM
@Lusty Stallion It's such a fun challenge, isn't it! I never would have written this without being assigned the tags. I wonder if anyone will be under the word count? 😂

12/10/21, 4:21 PM
@Norismo That is a very good question that I would love to see the answer to!
12/10/21, 3:40 AM
I loved seeing more of Talley and Ariel here! I also appreciate all the redhead representation in your stories. They're underrepresented in erotica, I think! I really like the sound of those two WIPs too...

12/10/21, 3:09 PM
I absolutely adore redheads, so this is definitely par for the course for me! I almost didn’t have a redhead protagonist for this story until I came up with Talley. Looking forward to putting both WIPs out… eventually! I’m so busy, haha, but I’m working away. @bluesuedewho
12/9/21, 9:49 PM
My interest and curiosity is peeked, I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new rea9

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Glad it was interesting! @darkblade2814

12/10/21, 2:55 PM
@bluesuedewho the final part of the comment is incomplete, what i meant was: I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new reality
12/10/21, 1:58 PM
can't wait for more.
12/10/21, 3:34 AM
Love the Ariel and Talley dynamic! (Also, oooh! New class/caste...)

12/10/21, 8:45 AM
Talley as a character basically came out of nowhere and stole my heart. I’m glad you’re enjoying how he interacts with Ariel! Also, yeah, Sirens are tons of fun. It’s going to be fun continuing to flesh them out and show them off. Thanks for continuing to read! @bluesuedewho
12/10/21, 4:40 AM
a Stradivarius of passion!!!!!!!!
12/9/21, 8:50 PM
Snugglebutt ❤

12/10/21, 3:04 AM
🥰 @TheWanderer
12/9/21, 11:34 PM
this is a cool idea 😁😁 looking forward to the next chapter of edits, you have a great flair for creating some really engaging characters--particularly in that story. And that isn't even considering the smuttyness, which you do a great job of too!

12/10/21, 12:36 AM
@Botbot just finished actually reading and now just as eager for the next installment of this as I am for edits and corrections! part of me was thinking it would be hot if Dr D was restrained "just so he'd stop wiggling" so that Courage could lick whipped cream and fruit off him or something like that 😆

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Thanks! I do have some ideas for how to make kinks cozy/wholesome in the story, or cozy things kinky. @Botbot