Recent Comments

12/10/21, 6:44 PM
I am a sucker for clever wordplay and banter, and the first bit where Dr. Darkness wakes up in his new reality hit those buttons so well! This is really just a lovely story with hot sex and reality changes gone wrong. I like how this story has similarities to your other work, but feels completely different. I'm also very impressed at just how much writing you do. Impressed and envious. I hope there is a continuation to this story. I want to learn how Dr. Darkness screwed up and got to this reality. And I really want more genuine romantic, yet steamy, sex between Courage and Darkness.

12/11/21, 10:01 PM
Thanks! I had fun writing the dialogue for this one. I think the main thing tying my stories together is a "sexy disaster" element -- plans going gloriously wrong. Unlike other WIPs, I just have very rough notes on this one instead of drafts. I wanted to see if there was an interest in a story like this before I spent a lot of time writing it. @Proteus
12/11/21, 8:43 PM
Absolutely fantastic. Incredibly hot and sexy, with a fantastic balance of denial and release. I was really excited when you told me about this one, and it lived up to my expectations!!!

12/11/21, 8:52 PM
That's exactly what I was going for; I've never done this before, so I was worried it would get repetitive or something boner-killing like that. I'm glad I was able to write it in a way that kept up the tension without losing interest! @Razz TFs
12/10/21, 3:50 AM
Wow, this chapter was very, very hot! Nicely done -- great tension and anticipation!

12/10/21, 3:11 PM
Thanks! I’m glad I was able to get the right erotic atmosphere across. I’m hoping to continue to improve in those areas. @time.to.occur

12/11/21, 12:41 PM
@Soren Fitz well it got me nice and hard, so well done!

12/11/21, 3:29 PM
Hell yeah! That's always good to hear. @Dace
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12/11/21, 12:54 AM
Need Dr. Darkness to get knocked up for real
12/7/21, 10:58 PM
With those tags I didn't expect to enjoy this as much as I did. And I loved the twist at the end. I also enjoyed having to write to tags I wouldn't normally. It allowed me to explore new areas through my writing. Awesome job man, and you were much closer to the word limit suggestion.

12/7/21, 11:02 PM
@Lusty Stallion It's such a fun challenge, isn't it! I never would have written this without being assigned the tags. I wonder if anyone will be under the word count? 😂

12/10/21, 4:21 PM
@Norismo That is a very good question that I would love to see the answer to!
12/10/21, 3:40 AM
I loved seeing more of Talley and Ariel here! I also appreciate all the redhead representation in your stories. They're underrepresented in erotica, I think! I really like the sound of those two WIPs too...

12/10/21, 3:09 PM
I absolutely adore redheads, so this is definitely par for the course for me! I almost didn’t have a redhead protagonist for this story until I came up with Talley. Looking forward to putting both WIPs out… eventually! I’m so busy, haha, but I’m working away. @bluesuedewho
12/9/21, 9:49 PM
My interest and curiosity is peeked, I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new rea9

12/10/21, 3:02 AM
Glad it was interesting! @darkblade2814

12/10/21, 2:55 PM
@bluesuedewho the final part of the comment is incomplete, what i meant was: I hope we can see more hero/villain couples and how they are living in the new reality
12/10/21, 1:58 PM
can't wait for more.
12/10/21, 3:34 AM
Love the Ariel and Talley dynamic! (Also, oooh! New class/caste...)

12/10/21, 8:45 AM
Talley as a character basically came out of nowhere and stole my heart. I’m glad you’re enjoying how he interacts with Ariel! Also, yeah, Sirens are tons of fun. It’s going to be fun continuing to flesh them out and show them off. Thanks for continuing to read! @bluesuedewho
12/10/21, 4:40 AM
a Stradivarius of passion!!!!!!!!