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12/14/21, 8:43 PM
I want to read this later. Not many mpreg stories.
12/14/21, 12:05 PM
Oh I bet I can guess who these tags were suggested by! Can't wait to read this one after work today.
Nov 26, 2021
12/13/21, 5:17 PM
I'm glad you included the happy ending tag - otherwise I'd have tapped out on this one and missed the great resolution. The middle of the story was rough to get through because the stakes were so high with a child being in the picture.
12/13/21, 10:00 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
12/13/21, 12:29 AM
This was a beautifully written, understated story. You might get a complaint "where's the mind control?", which you should ignore, in my opinion. Seduction and manipulation are "mind control" enough for some stories. Not everything has to be orbital mind control lasers.

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@amul thanks! Actually the orbital mind control lasers are in the next chapter :)
12/13/21, 1:01 AM
Interesting story. Nice start. I like the slow and steady approach with a clear cut element of something is going on. So yeah sexy.
12/13/21, 12:56 AM
Nicely written.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 12:36 AM
I love this! Such a hot study, I can't wait to see what Sam does to Bill next.
12/12/21, 8:58 PM
thx for posting!! great as fuck.. inspiration and more. great description of transformation
12/12/21, 7:32 AM
Really great story. I would have preferred some of the transformation to have been subtler, not having the barber telegraph every change explicitly, and perhaps skipping the piss and rubber shirt. I would also have made the barber a bit more professional, skipping the shoe and hookup at the end, and instead have him kicked out still in a state of shock. As he is walking home he is struggling with conflicting emotions being horrified he is at his changes, in disbelief it even was possible and happened, despair about how to revert it, and incredibly turned on by it all. Then he meets the scally group again on his way back and finds them irresistable. I always find it interesting to read different people describe changes for a stereotype, like the shape of the head, the neck, the tattoos. Always an inspiration when you try to describe something yourself.