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12/14/21, 10:35 PM
Great Story!
12/14/21, 8:43 PM
I want to read this later. Not many mpreg stories.
12/14/21, 12:05 PM
Oh I bet I can guess who these tags were suggested by! Can't wait to read this one after work today.
Nov 26, 2021
12/13/21, 5:17 PM
I'm glad you included the happy ending tag - otherwise I'd have tapped out on this one and missed the great resolution. The middle of the story was rough to get through because the stakes were so high with a child being in the picture.
12/13/21, 10:00 AM
Great start! Looking forward to more!
12/13/21, 12:29 AM
This was a beautifully written, understated story. You might get a complaint "where's the mind control?", which you should ignore, in my opinion. Seduction and manipulation are "mind control" enough for some stories. Not everything has to be orbital mind control lasers.

12/13/21, 5:01 AM
@amul thanks! Actually the orbital mind control lasers are in the next chapter :)
12/13/21, 1:01 AM
Interesting story. Nice start. I like the slow and steady approach with a clear cut element of something is going on. So yeah sexy.
12/13/21, 12:56 AM
Nicely written.
Anonymous
12/13/21, 12:36 AM
I love this! Such a hot study, I can't wait to see what Sam does to Bill next.
12/12/21, 8:58 PM
thx for posting!! great as fuck.. inspiration and more. great description of transformation