Recent Comments

12/12/21, 7:05 AM
Great story. Or, hopefully, the start of one! I love how refreshing you make it: flipping the whole villain overpowers hero cliché, and making it both funny and damn hot at the same time. Thanks!

12/17/21, 4:33 AM
Thanks! I have vague ideas on continuing this one. @Yunnick
Anonymous
12/12/21, 6:10 AM
What a fun story. I keep hearing Zim's voice for Dr. Darkness. Anyway, great job

12/17/21, 4:32 AM
LOL. I guess they do have similarities. Thanks for the compliment! @
Conversion Enthusiast
12/17/21, 2:50 AM
What a beautiful showdown! Poor abdamelek, fought so valiantly and his men
12/16/21, 3:59 PM
Loved this. Hoping for more.
Anonymous
12/16/21, 2:21 AM
This is so hot and I love how you write scenes
Anonymous
12/16/21, 2:19 AM
please continue this story! i love the characters and the dynamic. its so good!
12/15/21, 1:00 AM
You really hit on something here, Turkish culture is at once much more homophobic than American culture but it's immensely less repressed about casual contact between men. The massage scenes are really doing it for me - hot!

12/15/21, 8:08 PM
Thanks @amul! I'm trying to hint at things, without spelling them out. Since, I really don't know much about the culture.
12/15/21, 1:01 AM
I love a slow burn ...

12/15/21, 2:22 AM
Me, too. I guess I'm a little disappointed there isn't any actual hypnosis, since it's tagged - but maybe it doesn't have to be verbal to count. This is hot, regardless! A slow, gradual seduction without any mind tricks might even be hotter in some ways. I think you mean Bluto, not Brutus. It's been a while for me, too. I like the image. 🙂 Edit: just read the comments on the first chapter, lol. I guess I'm that guy... but I'm not really complaining!

12/15/21, 2:29 AM
@meatheadosis Keep in mind, it *is* a slow burn. There may very well be hypnosis coming in a later chapter.

12/15/21, 3:55 AM
@amul At this point, I'm fine with it either way. I love seduction stories! I don't know if I've ever even seen one in real life that went from a "no" to an enthusiastic "yes" (seen guys get less picky as it gets later/drunker, but that's *not* what I mean by a seduction).

12/15/21, 8:07 PM
@meatheadosis there was a Bluto, and a Brutus in the Popeye cartoons. Glad you're enjoying the story. Next time I'll have giant space lasers hypnotize him in the first chapter :)
12/15/21, 7:56 PM
It's definitely becoming steamy. This is so casual and yet so hot.
12/15/21, 7:43 AM
I would really like to see the rugby team who knocked him up become father's to the boy growing inside the daddy. And as Dace suggested maybe the little boy needs a brother.