Recent Comments

12/16/21, 4:09 PM
Wow. No idea how I missed this when it got posted. This is awesome. Incredibly clever, fun and cute. And very hot. I loved all of the kinks you hit on. And the dialog is really great.

12/17/21, 4:37 AM
Thanks for the kind words! I also posted another chapter of Household Spirits while taking a break from Edits (if you're following that one). https://www.gayspiralstories.com/story/show/10002991 @MonsterMash62
Team Gabe, or now Hector?
12/13/21, 1:49 AM
Oh, yes! Overwhelmed by superhuman sexual technique has been one of my things since Frank Herbert did it in "Heretics of Dune." Dr. Darkness trapped in a feedback loop transforming himself and Hector under the influence of those techniques used on unlock the erotic sensations from every body part would be awesome. Blue, I am so excited that you hit on this story idea. Your writing is so good, I now have multiple series to obsess about! Thanks!

12/17/21, 4:35 AM
Oooh, a classy smut reference! I'm glad you liked it! The idea has been bubbling in the back of my mind for a while now. Edits is due an update before this story, but I do have ideas for continuing this! @Team Gabe, or now Hector?
12/12/21, 7:05 AM
Great story. Or, hopefully, the start of one! I love how refreshing you make it: flipping the whole villain overpowers hero cliché, and making it both funny and damn hot at the same time. Thanks!

12/17/21, 4:33 AM
Thanks! I have vague ideas on continuing this one. @Yunnick
Anonymous
12/12/21, 6:10 AM
What a fun story. I keep hearing Zim's voice for Dr. Darkness. Anyway, great job

12/17/21, 4:32 AM
LOL. I guess they do have similarities. Thanks for the compliment! @
Conversion Enthusiast
12/17/21, 2:50 AM
What a beautiful showdown! Poor abdamelek, fought so valiantly and his men
12/16/21, 3:59 PM
Loved this. Hoping for more.
Anonymous
12/16/21, 2:21 AM
This is so hot and I love how you write scenes
Anonymous
12/16/21, 2:19 AM
please continue this story! i love the characters and the dynamic. its so good!
12/15/21, 1:00 AM
You really hit on something here, Turkish culture is at once much more homophobic than American culture but it's immensely less repressed about casual contact between men. The massage scenes are really doing it for me - hot!

12/15/21, 8:08 PM
Thanks @amul! I'm trying to hint at things, without spelling them out. Since, I really don't know much about the culture.
12/15/21, 1:01 AM
I love a slow burn ...

12/15/21, 2:22 AM
Me, too. I guess I'm a little disappointed there isn't any actual hypnosis, since it's tagged - but maybe it doesn't have to be verbal to count. This is hot, regardless! A slow, gradual seduction without any mind tricks might even be hotter in some ways. I think you mean Bluto, not Brutus. It's been a while for me, too. I like the image. 🙂 Edit: just read the comments on the first chapter, lol. I guess I'm that guy... but I'm not really complaining!

12/15/21, 2:29 AM
@meatheadosis Keep in mind, it *is* a slow burn. There may very well be hypnosis coming in a later chapter.

12/15/21, 3:55 AM
@amul At this point, I'm fine with it either way. I love seduction stories! I don't know if I've ever even seen one in real life that went from a "no" to an enthusiastic "yes" (seen guys get less picky as it gets later/drunker, but that's *not* what I mean by a seduction).

12/15/21, 8:07 PM
@meatheadosis there was a Bluto, and a Brutus in the Popeye cartoons. Glad you're enjoying the story. Next time I'll have giant space lasers hypnotize him in the first chapter :)