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offeringservice26
2/2/22, 8:59 PM
wow, the guest contributor really did a great job, well done!
2/1/22, 11:02 PM
So good! I'm glad you are back! Is there any other place to keep track of your updates?

Spandexlad
2/2/22, 4:37 AM
@Gay_Genes This is the only place I upload stories.

2/2/22, 5:57 PM
@Spandexlad I remember following you on tumblr years ago. Still a fan! Thank you for still posting!
2/2/22, 7:15 AM
This looks promising! Looking forward to seeing the next part of it. One small tip, I would make the mental commands in italics so they’re easier to differentiate.

Spandexlad
2/2/22, 4:35 PM
@Grant Spiral OMG, thank you for saying something. They are in italics in my file but it seems the formatting didn't copy over and that would be very confusing in the next chapter. I'll get this chapter fixed when I can.
Anonymous
2/2/22, 3:10 AM
The story has a very strong romantic element for sure. The love between Shelby and Dickon feels forbidden, and theres certainly a feeling of hope when you get to the ending. i admit the style took a second to get used to. But there is great care taken to write a very technically sound story. Writing is far and away the most important category for me, and you did an excellent job on that front.

2/2/22, 3:25 AM
Thanks! This one went through a lot of revision before I hit publish. Glad you enjoyed :)
Anonymous
2/2/22, 2:48 AM
So hot!! I'm loving it!!!!
Zac
2/1/22, 9:02 PM
Damn, this made me hard. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Dec 18, 2021
2/1/22, 3:10 PM
Damn, this is so sweet! And hot, and fun. A cute read, with just enough mystery and a nice helping of benevolence.
2/1/22, 12:22 PM
nice. can't wait for more.
Evan
2/1/22, 10:07 AM
Great start to a series! His first victim sure made life easier for him. Already thinking most of what he wanted anyway. I wonder whether he'll have a tougher time with the rest of the guys not being so eager to be controlled and being more resistant to finding him sexy.
Anonymous
1/31/22, 8:58 PM
next one? pretty please...