Recent Comments

2/4/22, 5:32 AM
That was heartbreaking. I don't think I've ever been so caught up in a story on this site. I love what others have written but the humanity and inequity in this is touching. I hope for my own sense of peace, that they find a way to be together

2/4/22, 7:01 AM
@Stroppy Author. Thanks for commenting, and thanks for being on the journey with them. Ehh... I want that for them, but, it's very hard to find a fix. I've just uploaded so I'm currently in Eddy's brain trying to handle things; perhaps scheme, perhaps flip out. I've got about three scraps of half chances, and maybe Eddy confronting The Mayor again? its gonna get worse before it gets better I think. I'm also thinking the next chapter will be double-length and final.

2/5/22, 3:44 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Email me if you want to brainstorm. I think I'm attracted to how well you captured the innocence of Yarif, and his vulnerability. And Eddies self reflection is so genuinely paced. There are so many humanistic features to this and so well done.

2/5/22, 1:30 PM
@Stroppy Author If I emailed you a draft script of all but the final scene, would you give me a rundown of how you think the story would realistically resolve, versus how you would like to see it resolve? I've never done this before, but I think I need outside insight. You would of course be spoiling the entire story finale for yourself.
Dec 18, 2021
2/5/22, 7:09 AM
Well I enjoyed it!
Anonym
2/3/22, 8:59 PM
Not gonna lie, this story is hot, but once you described the Prime Minister, I think I recognized him and that was a weird feeling. Your story writing and the hypnosis is very good, but I just couldn't continue to be aroused by it, once his face was there. But that's different tastes I suppose. (Since I have to know to sate my curiosity if I'm right... does the PMs name sound similiar to Furtz?)

2/4/22, 8:21 PM
@Anonym Interesting ... I had the opposite reaction. Your hint enabled me to figure out who this was, and once I googled some pics, I was much more into the story! :-)

Anonym
2/5/22, 12:16 AM
@Retrofantasia just to close to home for me I suppose. I dislike him in general and wasn't expecting to see a local politician here. But it'd be boring if everyone likes the same stuff. I'm glad my comment made you enjoy the story more

2/5/22, 5:35 AM
@Anonym i guess the mistery has been solved! i usually don't write about celebs etc. but first time i saw him i imagined doing to him what i wrote about. sorry to hear that you couldn't be aroused by the story!
Anonymous
2/3/22, 4:44 PM
Oh god, so glad you come back writing, I love your works so much!!!

2/5/22, 5:31 AM
@anonymous thank you so much! it means a lot
2/5/22, 5:14 AM
I really enjoy how Simon's power seems to work, Please keep them coming
2/5/22, 1:11 AM
really liked it. I really enjoy fics involving politicians
2/4/22, 10:27 PM
Another great one! I can't wait for more!
Anonymous
2/4/22, 5:59 PM
very hot is there another part?
11/14/21, 12:54 PM
Ditto to the point about being worth the wait! And glad it got super wholesome at the end. looking forward to more of Marc and Sam's developing relationship!

11/15/21, 4:08 AM
Thanks! Nutiper helped a lot with the end scene. @Botbot

2/3/22, 12:17 AM
@bluesuedewho heyo, hope you are doing alright! looking forward to the next chapter if you're still writing.

2/3/22, 2:03 AM
Thanks for the concern! 10 is pretty well written (11 is in drafts too), it just needs editing since I'm juggling so many changes and plot threads at this point. @Botbot
2/2/22, 10:56 PM
I can't see the pages on the links to buy the book

2/2/22, 11:12 PM
@darkblade2814 I will edit that to make sure the links work. You can pre-order Kindle [HERE](https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09RPHNXY8/ref=sr_1_2?crid=Y5T7R6J3W27O&keywords=centauromachy&qid=1643810153&s=digital-text&sprefix=centauromachy%2Cdigital-text%2C52&sr=1-2). The Paperback version will hopefully be ready this weekend.

2/2/22, 11:14 PM
@absman420 I will go for kindlle, also, I hope Hercules ends up as a centaur, for irony

2/2/22, 11:17 PM
@darkblade2814 Thank you! Read the end of Book One for Heracles' ironic fate -- and the end of Book Two for a hint about what's next for everybody's favorite demigod.

2/2/22, 11:19 PM
@absman420 I will re read book one then