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2/7/22, 5:41 AM
An acceptable ending. There did not seem to be much the two could do to overcome their differences. It was a very believable ending. Real life rarely ends with magic spells fixing everything and this story did not either. I can relate to the storyline. I feel I am always just outside of other people's lives; looking in and wondering why I never seem to belong. I do have friends in my life and I can appreciate their happiness but companionship has always escaped me. I'll be honest and say I don't actively look for someone. I guess I just hope for a guy to just appear as if by magic at my door. It is not going to happen but I don't see myself finding anyone in any other way. A simpler way of saying it is confidence is sexy and I am plagued by self doubt. My inner self is hidden from most as if in a costume. It is one I have slowly crafted through years of interaction with people. It is not fake but merely an understanding that most people in your life are not interested in who a person truly is. They want lighter fare like talk of the weather or minor annoyances. I am unsure if I am a monster expecting people to care more or they are the monsters for not wanting deep explorations of interpersonal life. [feel free to delete this if it seems too personal.]

2/7/22, 8:13 AM
@Cutlerfan Delete!? You must be kidding, on the contrary, thank you for *being* personal. It's reading responses like this that make the effort and agonizing worth while.

Martin
2/7/22, 10:59 AM
@Cutlerfan I think the amount of people spending their life in involuntary solitude is way bigger than we know. So many people have problems reaching out to others, they are afraid of rejection, that they're not good or sexy enough, that they're too inexperienced and so on. I guess if everyone could look into the head of other people and realize, that so many people share the same problems as we do, it wouldn't be that difficult ... But we only see the bold and loud people, they dominate our daily lives and they're what we compare our attributes with.

2/7/22, 3:13 PM
@The Dirty Spiders I'm glad you like it. Your story really reached me.

2/7/22, 3:18 PM
@Martin I agree. I’ve always felt on the outside to degree but it is, at times, a unique vantage point to see society with most of the facades absent.

2/7/22, 6:56 PM
@Martin Thank you for joining in Cap'n. Now you're gonna have to read the WHOLE saga and rate and review it!!
Kyle Cicero
2/7/22, 5:36 PM
Damnnnnn lol
2/7/22, 4:30 PM
So hot! Greyson seems to know what he's doing. We're in good hands as long as he's running the show

2/7/22, 4:46 PM
@stimle thanks bud!
Kyle Cicero
2/7/22, 3:01 PM
I see another hot story cum-ing:)
2/7/22, 7:56 AM
Liked it. Hope there is more!
2/7/22, 6:02 AM
I followed you here from Nifty and all your stories are so well thought out, clear, and just plain hot, Hot, HOT. Keep up the great storytelling.