Recent Comments

Martin
2/8/22, 9:53 PM
I'm a late reader of this chapter... but I have to chime in to add my praises. This chapter is a lot of exposition, but man how much fantasy and creativity is there inside of you. I wonder where you get this from. What it must be looking like inside of your head. Anyway, I'm looking forward to read the final chapter!

2/9/22, 1:13 AM
@Martin Thank you Cap'n, and I appreciate you reading this even though it's not your normal material.
Martin
2/8/22, 10:04 PM
Such a bitter-sweet story. Forbidden love indeed, and it always invokes anger that people had (and still have) to suffer this. Thank you for this great experience. 5/5 for writing and romance.

2/9/22, 1:05 AM
Thanks, @Martin! I appreciate the feedback :)
Anonymous
2/8/22, 9:10 PM
Wow, that did not take long at all. Poor dumb Dallas has no idea what is happening.
hairyartist
2/8/22, 1:51 PM
I Love this Man, Thanks
2/8/22, 3:19 AM
Absman, you have an uncanny gift of creating an epic narrative. You aren't just telling a story, you are building a universe. And it's a universe that readers, such as myself, will want to visit again and again. What makes you great is you haven't just done this once, but you achieve this again and again. I will never tire in seeing what you're pervy mind writes next. My only frustration is that I so desperately want to visit your world for real. Can I please?

2/8/22, 12:04 PM
@rubbrsome From you, this means everything to my heart. What I like about this universe is there's no evil corporation or some deranged scientist bent on revenge. It's a bunch of misplaced mythological creatures who only have to deal with the foibles of their own gods . I'm not saying this to toot my own horn, but these characters write themselves -- they inform me what's next. Their group scenes are effortless and fun to write, their dynamic is so strong. (There's one here in chap 2 at the fight) I would also choose to live in this story.
2/8/22, 10:48 AM
Very hot story. Hope to see more actions between Frank and Joe.
2/8/22, 6:59 AM
What a great series so far. Really enjoying the mental changes to the bachelor party and discovering they weren't all straight to start with
2/8/22, 4:18 AM
Okay, I did not expect it to go there or so quickly. It was so freaking hot so I'm glad I was wrong. Now I'll just refresh the browser window obsessively until part three shows up and we can find out if Nash helps bitch out Dallas or if he joins Greyson...