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2/11/22, 5:07 AM
You are welcome and you are right. There are options out others can turn too. But when you come to a site about guys getting taken down a peg or two or more are we deciding to enter a world of the familiar where great writers can give the familiar an interesting take, like you do. Anyways, I'm going on too long on the topic. I'll write regarding a commission. Thank you for writing.
2/11/22, 4:43 AM
LOL, you "write" what your clients ask for? I'd say you kill it, destroy it, own rhem with every word. And they come back and we your readers come back because you make the familiar interesting. Think it's time to put my money were my mouth is and become a client. No doubt the story will be a familiar theme no doubt you will make it interesting as fuck and no doubt your words will fuck our minds like a virtual pile driver plowing into our inner selves. Familiar in theme sure but unique to you. No offense intended to the guy that called it familiar but every dude that takes the time to write deserves our thanks not just our comments. i's write you about my own "familiar" idea. I'll pay. You'll write. I will love it. the silent readers too afraid to comment will love it as well I'll pay more. You will write more. Yeah it'll be familiar like a story of lost or found love by author can be but it'll be your great take on it. I'll pay more, they will wait on your stories. and so on. All of us dependant on the guy with the bigger talent and greater discipline to put on paper what we can not: the guy with the bigger virtual cock in the firm of talent till we get used to waiting on every story. Ain't like ownership? Tons of readers here, a few critics too. Not enough authors. Thank you! I'll tune into your familiar story any day BOSS.

2/11/22, 4:55 AM
@Currious thank you for saying that, I'm aware i have a theme but all of the stories i post here are commisions by people who are asking for more of that theme. I'm sorry if that seems repetitious to some but it's what I'm paid to write. If it seems familiar or boring to others i'd suggest reading some of the other fine stories on the site.
Jack
2/11/22, 12:25 AM
Please tell me you guys are going to do more with this series! It's fantastic and I really want to see if this relationship progresses.
2/10/22, 10:39 PM
I am not much for spandex so I nearly didn't read this. But I am happy that I did. It is a great story.
2/10/22, 10:26 PM
You know, Nash still has an unfucked ass...
2/7/22, 3:47 AM
My friend, I am a three time Cancer patient. I'm not well now and I reflect on my past loves; my past aspirations and my unspoken desires and this echoes them all. I want a clear cut finish. I want completion and the end of the speculation. I am Yarifandeddy (an e.e. cummings reference), in my mind. Your story spoke to me so specifically that I'm moved emotionally. I wish, for your characters the closure I cant or wont have. In my mind, that makes you a very powerful writer.

2/7/22, 7:53 AM
@Stroppy Author First off, mate. Thank you for sharing. I'm quite a bit floored by your post and your situation kinda puts my own angst writing this, to task (there's been tossing, turning, self reflection, appeals for input, uncertainty, insomnia, stuck in the character's heads) but that all seems petty and insignificant compared to cancer survival and life reflection; **Thank you** for being on the journey with me. I promise neither of them are 'shallow inserts' but, I've been both—and have fallen for— 'the Yarif' and 'the Eddy' in my day, and neither position is more enviable or pleasant. In the end, I let their final conversation just be 'them'. I gave them the situation, begun with "hello asshole" and then let them go at it unencumbered by 'a story' or 'an author' any further. My thoughts on the ending and clarity; Yarif declares his love for Eddy goes beyond his stemmed-from-trauma people-prejudice. He declares*to* 'Eddy-the-Person' to *spite* Eddy-the-Person without being aware of the sudden bright irony and affirmation this hits home with. ("I'd love him even if he *was* a person., so there! you horrible *person*" etc.) He declares his 'love of the woods, to spite the trees'. I did have some guilty pleasure in the fact poor Eddy —probably on his last brain cell that 'could even'— was given some absolution *finally*, in such a "shave an a haircut; two bits" declaration. but, after all his graft, they got to somewhere they can build on truth rather then artifice, so long as the love is stronger than the pain and bruises it took to get there. I *know* they can get there now. I just don't know how long it's gonna take, so it seemed insincere to tie down a timeframe. I'm free to DM on our GSS discord or, on the GKS site forum if you want to have a more conversational exchange about it. Massive hugs and love. tDS

2/9/22, 3:59 AM
@The Dirty Spiders Unfortunately, I can't get into Discord. If Martin will allow, he can give you my email. I'll be going in to the hospital again this week so prolly no response for a week at least but you're more than welcome to it

2/10/22, 10:01 PM
@Stroppy Author Contact sent, and please mind yourself friend.
2/10/22, 8:54 PM
Nash seems to be implying that Greyson is a well known dom/top. Makes me wonder if he dominated any of Dallas' friends or teammates prior. great chapter as always!