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2/11/22, 9:26 AM
Wonderfully written, a hidden gem indeed! "Sad" is a tag I tend to avoid, personally, but the ending leaves some room for hope. Vivid in its imagery and powerful with emotion.

2/11/22, 1:19 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback @Norismo! I was on the fence about using the 'sad' tag, and just added a 'hopeful' tag to try and better convey what's going on here.
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:12 PM
I agree with controlme. Every story on this website, and many others, have the basics same theme. Yet, a talented writer, can make it enjoyable and erotic. Jack is such a writer. I would also agree with Jack that, if you don't like his stories, the solution is obvious. Simply go to somebody else. I look forward to the final chapter of the story and hopefully they'll be a continuation of the prior story involving the born again jock. look, from personal experience, I can tell you that it isn't easy to write highly erotic stories. You have to go over them again and again to get it right. Trust me, it takes time and effort. So I appreciate Jack and his writing. I am dazzled by his ability to pound them out, no pun intended, so we readers can do the same. Please don't take this as a slap anybody else but just something I felt had to be said.
Anonymous
2/11/22, 10:41 AM
You are one of my favorite writer on this site. Amazing work.
2/11/22, 1:33 AM
Turned into a total bottom by a top. Familiar story

2/11/22, 1:35 AM
@mjkuhl I write what my clients ask for :)

2/11/22, 9:53 AM
@mjkuhl, it should be familiar. It's the overwhelming theme of this entire website. And Jack Parker is really good at it. I came at least once from each of the chapters in this story. I read his stuff to get turned on, jerk off, and release. He doesn't disappoint. Just the right balance of story and sex to make it both interesting and hot. @Jack Parker, thank you for another awesome story. I sense that it has finished, but I'll just point out that there is plenty of room for more development. Dallas is still fully clothed and not wearing a collar, hasn't been double-teamed, hasn't been caged, etc...

2/11/22, 10:02 AM
@ControlMe the next chapter is the last one that was commissioned but maybe someone might order more
2/11/22, 9:40 AM
Amazing as always
2/11/22, 5:07 AM
You are welcome and you are right. There are options out others can turn too. But when you come to a site about guys getting taken down a peg or two or more are we deciding to enter a world of the familiar where great writers can give the familiar an interesting take, like you do. Anyways, I'm going on too long on the topic. I'll write regarding a commission. Thank you for writing.
2/11/22, 4:43 AM
LOL, you "write" what your clients ask for? I'd say you kill it, destroy it, own rhem with every word. And they come back and we your readers come back because you make the familiar interesting. Think it's time to put my money were my mouth is and become a client. No doubt the story will be a familiar theme no doubt you will make it interesting as fuck and no doubt your words will fuck our minds like a virtual pile driver plowing into our inner selves. Familiar in theme sure but unique to you. No offense intended to the guy that called it familiar but every dude that takes the time to write deserves our thanks not just our comments. i's write you about my own "familiar" idea. I'll pay. You'll write. I will love it. the silent readers too afraid to comment will love it as well I'll pay more. You will write more. Yeah it'll be familiar like a story of lost or found love by author can be but it'll be your great take on it. I'll pay more, they will wait on your stories. and so on. All of us dependant on the guy with the bigger talent and greater discipline to put on paper what we can not: the guy with the bigger virtual cock in the firm of talent till we get used to waiting on every story. Ain't like ownership? Tons of readers here, a few critics too. Not enough authors. Thank you! I'll tune into your familiar story any day BOSS.

2/11/22, 4:55 AM
@Currious thank you for saying that, I'm aware i have a theme but all of the stories i post here are commisions by people who are asking for more of that theme. I'm sorry if that seems repetitious to some but it's what I'm paid to write. If it seems familiar or boring to others i'd suggest reading some of the other fine stories on the site.