Recent Comments

2/11/22, 3:31 PM
Welcome back! You're one of my favorite authors as well. For a quick draft this is pretty perfect.
2/11/22, 9:26 AM
Wonderfully written, a hidden gem indeed! "Sad" is a tag I tend to avoid, personally, but the ending leaves some room for hope. Vivid in its imagery and powerful with emotion.

2/11/22, 1:19 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful feedback @Norismo! I was on the fence about using the 'sad' tag, and just added a 'hopeful' tag to try and better convey what's going on here.
Kyle Cicero
2/11/22, 12:12 PM
I agree with controlme. Every story on this website, and many others, have the basics same theme. Yet, a talented writer, can make it enjoyable and erotic. Jack is such a writer. I would also agree with Jack that, if you don't like his stories, the solution is obvious. Simply go to somebody else. I look forward to the final chapter of the story and hopefully they'll be a continuation of the prior story involving the born again jock. look, from personal experience, I can tell you that it isn't easy to write highly erotic stories. You have to go over them again and again to get it right. Trust me, it takes time and effort. So I appreciate Jack and his writing. I am dazzled by his ability to pound them out, no pun intended, so we readers can do the same. Please don't take this as a slap anybody else but just something I felt had to be said.
Anonymous
2/11/22, 10:41 AM
You are one of my favorite writer on this site. Amazing work.
2/11/22, 1:33 AM
Turned into a total bottom by a top. Familiar story

2/11/22, 1:35 AM
@mjkuhl I write what my clients ask for :)

2/11/22, 9:53 AM
@mjkuhl, it should be familiar. It's the overwhelming theme of this entire website. And Jack Parker is really good at it. I came at least once from each of the chapters in this story. I read his stuff to get turned on, jerk off, and release. He doesn't disappoint. Just the right balance of story and sex to make it both interesting and hot. @Jack Parker, thank you for another awesome story. I sense that it has finished, but I'll just point out that there is plenty of room for more development. Dallas is still fully clothed and not wearing a collar, hasn't been double-teamed, hasn't been caged, etc...

2/11/22, 10:02 AM
@ControlMe the next chapter is the last one that was commissioned but maybe someone might order more
2/11/22, 9:40 AM
Amazing as always
2/11/22, 5:07 AM
You are welcome and you are right. There are options out others can turn too. But when you come to a site about guys getting taken down a peg or two or more are we deciding to enter a world of the familiar where great writers can give the familiar an interesting take, like you do. Anyways, I'm going on too long on the topic. I'll write regarding a commission. Thank you for writing.