Recent Comments

2/19/22, 1:40 PM
Wow! Another great chapter! I can't wait for Trevor to join them. Trevor and Brad together would be so great.
11/21/21, 8:45 PM
Loved this. And loved how Soren got included in this too.

Martin
11/23/21, 4:21 AM
@Beaner He deserved that little nod towards him, for sure. But in real life, Soren is *much* better looking that the guy I described in my story!

1/18/22, 9:55 PM
@Martin twink of great looks confirmed *wink*
offeringservice26
2/19/22, 1:52 AM
This has been one of my favorites for a long time. Still holding out hope that there might be another part someday!
offeringservice26
2/19/22, 12:59 AM
Curious whether this is an original or a tribute. Either way, always hot reading a good JPS story!

SC Walker
2/19/22, 1:18 AM
Original Recipe, Real Deal Authentic JPS lol @offeringservice26
Anonymous
2/18/22, 9:58 PM
I've been re-reading this so much lol Can't wait for the next chapter
Snowbourn
2/18/22, 8:47 PM
Please keep writing! This story is great!
2/18/22, 1:18 PM
i wish i was colin
2/18/22, 9:43 AM
uhm please continue this is so hot!
Sep 22, 2021
2/18/22, 3:35 AM
Yep, this definitely feels like the setup for something very intriguing and potentially quite wholesome!
Sep 22, 2021
9/23/21, 3:32 AM
I wrote this a long time ago, more for setting than for explicit plot. I don't think I'll be going anywhere in particular with it, but if it inspires people to write in this universe, I want them to do so freely! I hope that the community story function inspires someone to write some hot, fun stuff with it!

2/18/22, 3:00 AM
@Dace Yep, I get that writing-for-world-building vibe pretty strong. You set an interesting stage here; it's just a little light on storytelling for my tastes. I'd love to see a good plot take place with these characters. Maybe visiting the Vale and learning that there's more freak to Nathan's puritan family than he knows?