Recent Comments

3/5/22, 4:42 PM
Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:01 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! As a new author, it's very encouraging to see people's comments like this.

Anonymous
3/5/22, 6:05 PM
@Hypnoguy67 We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys's history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys.

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 The above message: "We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys’s history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys." was from me, @Cuddle-switch, but it showed as if it was from anonymous for some reason.

3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're into the worldbuilding and characters. For me, a big goal for this chapter was developing more of who these people are, and especially trying to figure out what Marin is like after everything, ten years on.
3/5/22, 12:04 AM
Damn, I love this story.

3/5/22, 3:17 AM
@Beaner We love to hear it! Thanks for letting us know!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 3:35 AM
@Beaner I'm really glad you're enjoying it -- we look forward to writing more and we really enjoy hearing people's thoughts on this!
slut
3/2/22, 1:45 PM
more chapters please

3/3/22, 4:05 PM
Don't worry, as soon as I finish the Making of a Godfather—which is a damn ordeal, I tell you—and an origin story for Talley, I’ll be making another chapter or three for this baby! @slut
Anonymous
3/2/22, 4:31 PM
both hot and sweet, and Im loving the transrepresentation. not sure Im into all the womb fucking, but all in all a good story and neat entry to the contest

3/2/22, 4:42 PM
A risky addition to the story, I know! Haha. It seems both of my contest entries so far have had something a bit controversial toward the end there. Still, I’m glad it was hot and sweet—I was definitely going for both, and I’m glad the romance got through. Also, yeah, trans rep is my bread and butter (or, one of my bread and butters), and I’m glad to share it with everyone. There’s more coming, including probably follow-ups to this story! Thanks for reading.
2/27/22, 4:03 AM
Really enjoying this concept and execution. We have the brainwashing computer program that's making Nick into an alpha douche (oh no!), the hex that makes him bigger (when he's assertive?) and also seems to be effecting Darius (though we don't know the exact effects yet), and of chose whatever pseudo werewolf nonsense is in Nick's DNA. Looking forward to seeing if they can unravel the negative effects before it's too late. Also, as a real life pup handler i appreciate Darius journey and trying not to be a asshole Dom. Too many of those out there for my liking. Good boys get rewards, and being a dick doesn't make you an "alpha".

Kods
3/2/22, 12:28 PM
@BlindSeer0 Ah yes, I hope as everything unravels I hope readers enjoy. And I like exploring Darius growth towards domination and control of someone else. Especially when his main intentions and interests lean towards pampering and rewarding. He gets to explore the BDSM side that he hadn't known about, outside of being aware that it exists, and find where he falls in relationship to it.
Anonymous
2/28/22, 10:01 AM
I am so lucky to see you continue this story! I gotta confess I check from time to time if there is an update on your profile. I read your whole new chapter in one sitting! I cant wait to see how Darius grows into a dominant bottom and to find out what's going on with Nick! Please know that a bunch of us are looking forward to how your story will play out!

Kods
3/2/22, 12:14 PM
Dominant bottom? Darius is a power top through and through..... just kidding, but ihis position isn't really a secret. I tend to imagine most of my characters as verse of course where they fall on the scale might very from character to character. That said, I'm glad you're looking forward to more and I'm looking forward to bringing more.
3/2/22, 5:57 AM
Love how Luke is oblivious to everyone wanting to fuck his ass and his complete naivety
3/1/22, 11:05 PM
This is such an amazing reboot! As the above commenter said, you've done an AMAZING job rounding out (tee hee!) Luke's himbo energy: he genuinely doesn't know what's going on, which makes the build-up interesting and fun. And after reading countless stories about LGBTQIA teens being in agony over their sexuality and lamenting it, I must confess it's nice to see someone who isn't angsty, just...clueless. And the casual attitude toward sexuality is equally fascinating (Sammy is attracted to guys and the team is cool with it) and deep (the "bros" probably claim they AREN'T gay even as they ogle Luke's ass, because "it's only gay if you bottom" and all such nonsense). An amazing look into the jock mind! :)

SC Walker
3/1/22, 11:14 PM
@Feed Your Head Thank you so much for the comment! I'm glad you like the build-up and how clueless Luke is. Overall the story is very fluffy and will have a happy ending, but Luke will have to go through some struggles to get there. And yeah, my intention was that the rest of the team aren't gay, but Luke's ass is so divine even straight guys want to fuck it lol
Anonymous
3/1/22, 10:35 PM
i never comment on any stories but i cant resist for this one. ive been a fan of your writing from the works you posted on nifty and ever since i discovered it the JPS series has always been top tier. im absolutely loving how this reboot has been going so far and cant wait for the rest. i love the similarities as well as the differences between the original JPS to this reboot. its just as hot if not even hotter than the original already and i love the extra details we establish early on in this one. i really appreciate how naive Luke seems to be in this version and simultaneously how relaxed and openly attracted all the other jocks are to Luke and his "assets". Cant wait for Sammy's actions to open the floodgates for the rest of his buddies and possibly others outside their group. keep up the good work!

SC Walker
3/1/22, 10:41 PM
Thank you so much I truly appreciate such a detailed comment, receiving comments like this really helps motivate me to write. I'm glad you like all the extra stuff I've added, I feel like Luke and Sammy are more fleshed out now. And don't worry eventually Luke's teammates will get a shot at his bubble ;)
2/22/22, 10:49 PM
dying for a new chapter!

3/1/22, 7:56 PM
@Kurtis311 Stay living! It's coming! And it involves a boat, a lawn mower, and a birthday cake.