Recent Comments

3/8/22, 10:08 PM
Jay-sus, what a good read. Very tender and sweet. And blisteringly hot. I love how you left so many details unspoken, like where the curse came from, why cinnamon fixes it, why nobody reacted to or needed explanation about the curse, why Levi's parents can 'lift' it or whatever it was Peyton alluded to... just very nicely done and had a lovely, lived-in feel from top to bottom. (ba-dum *tsss*) From a writing perspective, I'd try to find a few more alternate adjectives - you used the word 'pleasure' a lot towards the end, which mildly jarred me out of the fantasy. I'm also dying for more details on their courtship, which for my taste was a litte glossed over. Overall, I loved it. Reminded me a lot of Frecklman64's *Curse of 100 Bottoms* story, which also was such a sweet blend of romance and magically induced need-to-fuck-right-now horniness. Fantastic work!

3/9/22, 6:54 AM
Ahhh, this is such a glowing review! Thank you very much. I do try to make my worlds so full and real that I can write in it and people can feel happy to just experience it, even if not everything is explicitly stated. I certainly don’t want to confuse anybody. I wish I had done more on the courtship, but it was already getting so long, and I felt like everything else was so necessary too—but I do have a follow-up planned for Levi and Peyton, and I wonder if I shouldn’t start with their courtship, and the shenanigans Levi got up to satisfying his heats while waiting to come around, before moving into the rest of that plot. We’ll see! I might have to check your recommendation out. Irresistible-horniness is one of my biggest kinks on this site, and I’d dig some more, even if I’d pity they there’s no cum inflation. Overall I’m so glad you were into it this much! Thanks for reading, and for reviewing. @Noam de Pluma
Brian
3/9/22, 1:18 AM
great storyline. had to keep reading all chapters before getting off with the newfound friends
slut
3/7/22, 11:02 AM
so so hot🔥

3/7/22, 5:39 PM
Hell yeah! Glad you enjoyed. I might make a couple more one-shots like this in the future, mostly on the side of sadism/roughness but with a heavy dash of romance. @slut
slut
3/7/22, 11:33 AM
so hot. next time some post orgasm torture pls.🥵

3/7/22, 5:38 PM
I'll have to read up on that! I know basically what to do but have to learn how to write it well, heh. Could be fun to write a one-shot of that ilk, though. (By the way, if you're on a bit of a spree of my stories, check out [Pheromones and the Boys Who Don't Want Them](https://www.gaykinkystories.com/story/show/10003599)! It doesn't have my name on it for now, so you can't see it on my story list, and don't tell anybody I sent you, but after P&FB you might be into this one too.) I'm really glad you enjoyed! This was one of my favourite one-shots to write. @slut
3/5/22, 11:21 PM
I also like the trans representation. And I empathize and appreciate the mental calculus and against Levi was under.

3/6/22, 1:12 AM
Yeah, I worked hard to represent that as well as I could so that people could put themselves in Levi’s shoes. I am very glad it worked! I strive to create characters real enough to empathise with. @astrologus
SC Walker
3/5/22, 4:46 AM
This was a really sweet story! It hit so many of my kinky itches, while also being wholesome and romantic. It's such an inspired idea: a guy with uncontrollable pheromones finds love with a demisexual guy. This fusion of kink and romance is something that I aspire to myself. Also the trans rep was amazing, there aren't enough stories about trans guys. Levi was extremely hot, even besides his horniness and I loved how you described the wombfucking. Peyton was sweet and adorable too!

3/5/22, 5:37 PM
This is all exactly what I’m striving for! This idea was sent by the fucking gods, I swear, I was so happy when it hit me, and I loved representing different ends of the queer community. I’m glad Levi was so hot. He’s like, my favourite character I’ve ever made (he’s one of my main roleplay characters) and I’m glad his personality and appearance got through. The wombfucking was risky to write, but it hit for me and hell yeah that it hit for you too. Thanks so much for reading! @SC Walker

SC Walker
3/5/22, 9:01 PM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Feel free to message me if you want! I'd love to chat more, exchange story ideas etc.
3/5/22, 4:42 PM
Continuing to enjoy this story. The world-building is superb, and the characters are well developed. I liked getting to meet Marin in this chapter and would love to know more of the history between Marin and Rhys. Keep up the excellent writing!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:01 PM
@Hypnoguy67 I'm really glad you're enjoying it! As a new author, it's very encouraging to see people's comments like this.

Anonymous
3/5/22, 6:05 PM
@Hypnoguy67 We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys's history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys.

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 The above message: "We already have a pretty clear idea of what Marin and Rhys’s history is, and I am wondering how and if we could drop some hints about it in the future. I would personally love to get Marin and Jasper in the same room so Marin could tell stories about Rhys." was from me, @Cuddle-switch, but it showed as if it was from anonymous for some reason.

3/5/22, 6:10 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're into the worldbuilding and characters. For me, a big goal for this chapter was developing more of who these people are, and especially trying to figure out what Marin is like after everything, ten years on.
3/5/22, 12:04 AM
Damn, I love this story.

3/5/22, 3:17 AM
@Beaner We love to hear it! Thanks for letting us know!

Cuddle-switch
3/5/22, 3:35 AM
@Beaner I'm really glad you're enjoying it -- we look forward to writing more and we really enjoy hearing people's thoughts on this!
slut
3/2/22, 1:45 PM
more chapters please

3/3/22, 4:05 PM
Don't worry, as soon as I finish the Making of a Godfather—which is a damn ordeal, I tell you—and an origin story for Talley, I’ll be making another chapter or three for this baby! @slut
Anonymous
3/2/22, 4:31 PM
both hot and sweet, and Im loving the transrepresentation. not sure Im into all the womb fucking, but all in all a good story and neat entry to the contest

3/2/22, 4:42 PM
A risky addition to the story, I know! Haha. It seems both of my contest entries so far have had something a bit controversial toward the end there. Still, I’m glad it was hot and sweet—I was definitely going for both, and I’m glad the romance got through. Also, yeah, trans rep is my bread and butter (or, one of my bread and butters), and I’m glad to share it with everyone. There’s more coming, including probably follow-ups to this story! Thanks for reading.